Flourished Fragments

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Flourished Fragments A solemness writhed gently and claimed me, As an exposed album conceived in years, Suspended in time, with light dust debris, For musing eyes glide fingers while mind clears. As an exposed album conceived in years, Braves new looks, giving it the once over, For musing eyes glide fingers while mind clears, Resurrects cognizance that takeover. Braves new looks, giving it the once over, Breathes life to old photos, the sleeper wakes, Resurrects cognizance that takeover, Garner grins joined by tears, oft laughter breaks. Breathes life to old photos, the sleeper wakes, Suspended in time, with light dust debris, Garner grins joined by tears, oft laughter breaks, A solemness writhed gently and claimed me. 2020 June 18 *1st Place* feelings of nostalgia ~~Eve Roper Picture #3

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2020 4:54:00 PM

a beautiful interpretation of the image, many congratulations on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2020 10:26:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your precious time and thoughtful expressions -- Aloha~@William

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/27/2020 12:45:00 AM

Your pantoum really has the effect of imprinting memories and blessed moments with your delightful words William. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2020 12:58:00 AM

I am exceedingly glad, Aditi, for your astute rendering and kind considerations, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2020 11:15:00 AM

William, I see you had your mind on old photos and remembering when. I too tend to do the same as it brings me peace and wish my children were still small, they were such joy. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2020 12:10:00 PM

Yes, still blessed with a mind apt to reminisce, Eve, with extended courtesies, my appreciation for the opportunity and my honorable win -- Aloha~William