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FLORIDA NATURE Sky-high beech trees tower my head; big parasol to earthly grounds Sun smiles gold drenching blue skies; warm breeze whish swaying luscious leaves Nature tickles round brown eyes, blushing rose hugs Eden Mistrels' tweet beckon ears to hear; classy stork flap it's wings to fly River running slow, clear as crystals, rumble soft: hush and gush. . . Bubbly creations, when will you know, our globe a heaven's rest? Salad fishes darting across~~ watchful fellow shows haunting moves Jolly chin-up catching around, tumbles along, giggles clang Hopping squirrel, biting teeth clamps on fish, poor fellow screams! Yellow blossoms blow fragrant smell; tall green bushes whispered groans and moans brushing life atop dullness-- left to right then fast and slow amidst this wild, how will I possess, some innocent eyes? _______________________________________________________________ ***Inspired by Robert Butler's painting: WILD SYMPHONY 3:35 pm, March 05, 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2015 4:23:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery, dear girl!! Good luck in the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 9:52:00 AM

thanks much Andie.. :)! GOd bless you always!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 5:18:00 AM

Hi Olive, I innocent eyes, you say! Awesome imagery. I've been to the grassy parts of Florida.... Nature's soooo beautiful there... Love LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 9:50:00 AM

I have never been anywhere in America but I have been watching much and reading much about it.. :)! Thanks Lolly Linda,. :) hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/6/2015 8:25:00 AM

larawan perpekto. God bless eloi>rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 9:48:00 AM

God bless Rajat. You are a fast learner of our language.. :)!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/6/2015 4:09:00 AM

The painting comes alive with your descriptive write, my dear kabayan. The sound, the fragrance, all the wild beauty of Florida nature leaps from the page and I fill the rush of pleasure your words has evoked. Thank you! Blessings for the contest! :D Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:52:00 AM

thanks much Kim for your generous comments.. :) I was just really inspired.. I wasn't even sure of what form shall I use.. but then Sijo is one of my fave forms and so this I chose.. I suppose Sonnet but I tried not to rhyme this time.. :)! welcome and thanks.. :D!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/5/2015 1:14:00 PM

A 7 , Olive, a beautiful descriptive write your pen flows just like a poet. Blessings dear friend

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:48:00 AM

Thanks much Eve.. You are a poet too.. :D!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2015 1:10:00 PM

This is beautiful, Olive_eloi!! This is what inspiration a painting can bring, let alone if you were to be there in person to see the live natural beauty. Your last line is lovely! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:47:00 AM

mmmn, I always love nature Paul.. pity that to where my home is there isn't much around just I so like it in pictures and well, I am always inspired to the life I see in nature.. refreshing, natural and so welcoming.... :)!

James Fraser

Date: 3/5/2015 1:06:00 PM

Florida and it's nature so much alive through your words Olive. Again the crafting is wonderful, allowing images to flicker through my mind. Good luck in Rhonda's contest little one, hugs aplenty, James :) xx :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:45:00 AM

Florida, I have never been there.. Just I have read lots of it and well, seen in in pics and documentaries.. :) I was caught by the title of the painting.. :) and Hey one of Disneyland is found there.. :)! I just tried,,,. :) hugs in clusters!! :D! :P

Constance La France

Date: 3/5/2015 7:17:00 AM

Olive, very nice, beautiful words to accompany the lovely picture, best of luck in the contest and thank you for visiting my poetry today ~~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:43:00 AM

thanks much Broken wings.. :)! I was just caught by the title of the painting that I tried to bring out the best I can in all areas the sounds of the wild.. :)! I hope this will please the judge,.. :D