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There was a mean, old alligator Who chanced upon young Master Baitor Both of them noted Pheromones floated When traipsing by came May B. Layder

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2018 10:08:00 AM

Ha ha, hopefully later minus gater they’ll float each other’s boats.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 10/25/2018 12:14:00 PM

Rico: I love great limericks and this and others of yours that I have read are great! Keep them coming and best to you as you continue your poetical journey. Glad you enjoyed the Reilly Green Bean Casserole write. My daughter corrected me - Reilly is a "she" not a "he" and I corrected the poem as a result - my face is red!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/27/2018 12:45:00 PM

Pity she did not do Campbell Soup - and the world - a favour by concocting a spicy fire ant recipe, or one including deer ticks, mosquitoes, yellow jackets, termites, blow flies, or even a Black Widow Web soup for Halloween? It would have made picnics so much nicer! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/25/2018 8:59:00 AM

Giggles!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2018 8:18:00 AM

ha ha ha love the clever word play in the second line especially!:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/24/2018 6:16:00 PM

Very clever Rico! I am having a full moon day with my husband telling me how to drive. I called him a backseat driver and he fired a few unmentionables back! I enjoyed the humor in your poem and I needed it! : )

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/26/2018 12:37:00 PM

I always let my late wife drive as she was more patient than I could ever be. However, it should be clear to your husband - and everyone else - that a driver must focus on what is happening on the road ahead with ZERO distractions from passengers and/or technology! Aloha! Rico