Florida Gardens -- Ten Words

Florida gardens boast menageries most marvelous—
Vermilion hibiscus nodding in the breathlike breezes
Infused with night-blooming jasmine and selenicereus scents.
Mockingbirds trilling like nightingales in the palm trees,
Twilight fading in the lush and dusky thickets…
Iguanas on perfumed frangipani blooming beneath
The luscious mangoes ripening on the bough;
And all overlain with pellucid starry skies…
Atavistically touching on my ancestral demesne
Like ripples on profound and placid pools
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Inman Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 1:11 AM
A beautiful write John, describing Florida beautifully. I have never had the pleasure of seeing Moonlight cactus in bloom, only in photos. The large flowers must be beautiful.
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January 11, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Returning with congratulations, John, for your wonderful placement with your beautiful poem. ~Susan
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January 11, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Beautiful poem using the 10 words John! Great imagery!! Congratulatons!!
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January 11, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win, John.
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January 11, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Hi John, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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January 11, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Great use of the ten words John.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ashley Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 8:17 PM
The required words are woven into your beautiful poem seamlessly, John. Just lovely! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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