Florida Fond Farewells

Have a party, all are leaving.
Fond farewells and sad goodbyes,
pack your clothes and try not grieving.
Hug each other, do not cry.

Winter's over head north fast, five days later home at last.
Unload your over swollen car set up the kitchen and the bar.

Call your friends, tell them your near.
"Come on over, have a beer."
Same friends there are same ones here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Come on over for a beer, sounds good to me Gail. Another neat poem >> James
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July 9, 2010 at 11:54 AM
http://www.amazon.com/Checking-Your-Grammar-Scholastic-Guides/dp/0590494554 This is the best simple guide to all we need to know that I have found. You can get it used for a pennie on Amazon! Rememberyou need a subject and a verb t be a sentence and end with aperiod. so line one does NOT end with a period. Have a party, all are leaving. You can but Idon't capitalize the first word of every line. Only of a sentence or proper noun, person, place or thing.
Guzzi Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 10:54 AM
interesting the patterns we keep! Light & Love
Dufresne Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Cool poem Gail. enjoyed it!
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June 2, 2010 at 11:40 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Gail. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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June 1, 2010 at 4:48 PM
funny!! enjoyed reading. Hope this is not an omen to the decline of florida's prosperity.
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