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Floral Solace

He flipped the delicate Lotus Flower from one palm into the other

Wondering about a world of meaning for petals in transitory circles

Painted a moon and sun giving birth to all life and death just the same

One hand cannot clap on its own and he firmly gave thanks to nature

A long war had left him intact and the red petals painted over blood


He preferred the Buddha’s gentle plants over grave yard poppies

Although even a soldiers’ grief erodes over spaces of impermanence

When autumn fell upon prayer and crimson hope of togetherness

He dried his sorrows and awaited the wind to blow away sad tears

Settled in memories of harvest and lit a lantern made from parchment


As seeds succumbed to hibernation he tightened his ruby loin cloth

For it was winter and a snow storm loomed behind magical mountains

Clouds gathered at the edge of a hillside where he sought shelter and peace

Safe in a cradle of comfort and finite belonging he tasted the new season

And held the picturesque flower in his mind to weather its benevolent change


29th October 2019

Writing Challenge, October, 2019 - Flower or Flowers - 

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La France Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Kai, congratulations on your placement in my writing challenge!
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 6:25 PM
such beautiful description Kai, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:37 PM
- Flowers are beautiful although some are called weeds ... this would be a contest that would have been difficult to judge - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Kai :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Congrats on your placement!;)
Neumann Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:29 AM
Thank you so much Brenda. Kind wishes, Kai
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