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Floral Past

At dawn beyond my restless sleep, With mental arms in memory, I strain to pick them, sort them, rearrange Replace the few, that turned to weeds Rewind, review, and make them new Old promises and rendezvous I keep ~ While dew drops formed too many years Have stained and dried away The floral past is but a dream Of how I cling to yesterday ~ Only to wake, I will face the day With the same dried pattern The same old way In retrospect, I do reflect But with a fresh bouquet
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Reinvent, Reimagine, Revamp! " Contest Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet Inspired by the poem......."Sequence of Events"
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Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:58 PM
beautiful expression of emotions through your words...great write Carrie...congrats on your win :)
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November 12, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Hi Carrie, your poetry never fails to *wow*. I am humbled to place in a contest along with your fine work. An awesome write and congrats on the win :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:51 AM
So well expressed! Congratulations.
Bantawa Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:17 AM
You are an awesome writer, congrats on your win
Shango Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 9:58 AM
This is a lofty write, and I feel the moment of poem, bridging things that is hard for many to grip with, seeking consolation each new page of time, finding in each day's time a constancy similar to yesterday and knowing we should celebrate that order, despite, because we have a life. Sorry to project os much, but we project is what is invoked in us ... and only a good poem does that. Love.
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May 13, 2009 at 8:14 PM
"Have A Very Beautiful Night Dear Carrie~Filled With Even More, Beautiful Dreams!!!":):) Bye Dear Lady ~
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May 13, 2009 at 8:11 PM
Smile~Well, if I could, Then I would gibve "You" a fresh bouquet everyday!!!:):)~"Hello Precious, Priceless & Gifted Carrie Richards & All Your Loves!!!":):)~I hope that "You Are All" doing beautifully this evening!!?~What a deepened write this is~So simple yet so profound an expresion from "Your Beautiful Heart!!!":):)~I am running kind of in-between tonight~Yet, I would love to get back to 'You" tomorrow~And "Thank You," for stopping by, "It Meant a Lot!!!"~"My Love To You & Your Loves, John!"
Winter Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Carrie, I am sensing something sad here. Maybe I am wrong, not sure, though your words are beautiful as ever. Some memory from your past, maybe it is just the time factor, and how fleeting it is. Sigh. That alone makes me sad. Love, Shar
Williams Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Beautifully crafted Carrie... poignant and telling of memories : ) ps Thanks for the comment Carrie
Reynolds Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Beautiful, Carrie. you know how I can relate to this piece. you shine. and yes, we are keeping the new tree wet. :) not hard when it WON'T STOP RAINING! lol and I'm so glad to hear eveeyone like my crazy-girl's card! XOXO love you, C, love, me
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May 12, 2009 at 9:38 AM
oh intense Carrie. Nicely done. Roses...
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