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Floral Heart

As summer turns to fall; a chill moves through the air, The beauty of nature; like those of flowers; are in their final days, Such delicate ones; who call outdoors their home, Their roots engraved into the ground, The sun is their nurturer; who showers them with life, To grow; to survive; to dance in the rain, Without rays of warmth; they cannot go on, Fading with every last breath, A heart could be similar; as is mine, Fragile and soft; like petals of flowers, The warmth that flowed through these veins; has become watered-down, Shifting to a bitter cold; waiting for the storm to pass, Love is a disease; I cannot fight, For a life without love; without a cure; is a lost cause.
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December 7, 2010 at 5:01 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Julia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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December 6, 2010 at 6:22 PM
wow strong point here my friend
Parker Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Love is a blossoming rose that will blight and fade with time! You captured the essence of endearing then fading love. Keep on watering and nurturing, and a new rose will blossom for you!
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December 5, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much.Keep posting such romantic poems.
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December 5, 2010 at 3:38 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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