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HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL THE SUPER SOUPER'S.

HERE'S TO A HAPPY AND MORE IMPORTANTLY A HEALTHY 2021

We welcome New Year with celebrations Fireworks will light up the dark evening sky Rockets explode into bright carnations Pyrotechnic flowers seen way up high Fireworks will light up the dark evening sky I gaze at the sky with awe and delight Pyrotechnic flowers seen way up high A floral display that’s viewed late at night I gaze at the sky with awe and delight Rockets explode into bright carnations A floral display that’s viewed late at night We welcome New Year with celebrations Fireworks Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper Ten syllables per line, how many syllables Rhyme checked with rhymezone 12/31/20

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/5/2021 11:55:00 PM

Thank you for participating and winning in the Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Jan. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2021 1:56:00 PM

A lovely fireworks bouquet! Congratulations, Jan!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/19/2021 12:41:00 AM

Let's hope it's a much better one!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/2/2021 10:06:00 PM

Hello Jan … may 2021 be a better year for us all. There has been a few rays of sunshine and your poem describes one nicely - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/2/2021 7:58:00 AM

Enjoyed your floral fireworks display. Beautiful imagery.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:36:00 PM

thanks Juliet:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/2/2021 6:17:00 AM

A wonderful pantoum Jan, love the imagery! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:36:00 PM

thanks so much tania:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/1/2021 2:14:00 PM

Pyrotechnic! Wow! Wonderful poem. Great word!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:36:00 PM

thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/1/2021 11:09:00 AM

Well said! But did you see the Scottish 500-drone synchronised flyby? That was more awesome than fireworks! Happy 2021! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:35:00 PM

you make me smile:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/1/2021 9:21:00 AM

jan - it's nice to read an upbeat poem and yours does the trick! i haven't been able to summon those hopeful new year's feelings yet - hopefully, i will soon...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:33:00 PM

I don't like new year i don't celebrate it just tolerate it... glad to see the back of 2020 though!:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/1/2021 9:00:00 AM

Well written Jan, good job and good luck in the games!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:32:00 PM

thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2021 8:49:00 AM

This form mystifies me, but you work in it beautifully, Jan! I could see the exploding flower-works clearly through your words. Best wishes in Eve's contest! And a healthy new year for you and your family. Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 6:32:00 PM

thanks Carolyn I enjoy this form and find the villanelle much more of a challenge, happy new year :-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/1/2021 4:33:00 AM

Love this Jan. Happy N E W Year and God B L E S S you always

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2021 3:05:00 PM

Thanks Regina:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/31/2020 10:35:00 PM

A lovely pantoum. Happy New Year to you and husband. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2021 3:04:00 PM

thanks Victor sending my very best wishes for 2021:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/31/2020 6:55:00 PM

I'm happy that you welcome fireworks with pyrotechnics, as I welcome the coming year, sawing wood on my favorite pillow... Early to bed and late to rise, I always say! ~ Rebellious descendant of Ben Franklin

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2021 1:48:00 PM

lol thanks GW Happy New year:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/31/2020 1:22:00 PM

Let's hope its a good one Jan, happy new year. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2020 1:35:00 PM

To be honest its not been bad for us and having son home been the best thing, lets hope for a happy and healthy 2021 cant wait for this year to be over!:-) hugs jan xx