Flooding Tears

Sweet benign breeze swept my tears dry
When my heart bled and spilling out
On madness, loathing minds awry
Lead to crime where love fading out.

On the streets where striplings beseech
Sweet benign breeze swept my tears dry
For some nibbles, they beg and preach
While some granaries choked and sigh.

Sufferings around, made me cry
Of the pain, life and death pother
Sweet benign breeze swept my tears dry
When resumes I tried to smother.

Then saw the nature joined with me
And flooded the world with her cry
Love and empathy, back with plea
Sweet benign breeze swept my tears dry.



Won second place in STRAND SELECT O ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Won third place in Distant Refrains Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

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Date: 2/16/2020 2:32:00 PM
Very beautiful, Jenish. I especially like the last verse. Congratulations on your win!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/16/2020 8:57:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for your wonderful support..
Date: 2/16/2020 6:37:00 AM
Nicely penned, Jenish, congrats on your placement. John
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/16/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you John for your kind comment..
Date: 2/15/2020 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jenish. Well done.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Line for your wonderful support..
Date: 2/15/2020 12:38:00 PM
Very nicely penned Jenish, Congrats on your win..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Joseph for that wonderful contest which enabled me to try this form of poetry.. Thank you also for that kind placement..
Date: 2/15/2020 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, this is so heartfelt and healing.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Michelle.. Have a great day!!
Date: 2/14/2020 5:35:00 PM
Jenish, a tender and touching write. I especially like the powerful words of your refrain. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thank you John for your support and comment..
Date: 2/4/2020 4:14:00 AM
Quite a deep verse filled with emotion. Well written Jenish, I called here after I saw a stanza you entered for Gregory's contest, a verse in its own right. Good luck. Tom
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/4/2020 4:34:00 AM
Thank you dear Tom for your time and kind comment..
Date: 1/23/2020 10:24:00 AM
An excellent entry for Joseph's contest - best wishes and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/24/2020 12:12:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer for your kind words..
Date: 1/23/2020 4:22:00 AM
Excellent penning Jenish. Love your refrain it’s powerful in the emotions it shows Best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/23/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for your inspiring words.. Have a nice day!!
Date: 1/22/2020 7:53:00 AM
After this excellent example I should check out this form. Well done.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/22/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Richard..I tried it for the first time..
Date: 1/20/2020 6:24:00 AM
very well written!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/20/2020 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Aditi..
Date: 1/19/2020 11:36:00 PM
Powerful and solemn... It was a pleasure to read... left me feeling quiet. Excellent prose. Ann
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Ann for your inspiring words..
Date: 1/19/2020 5:25:00 PM
Jenish, Really nice work with the quatern - wonderfully expressed images. Good luck in the contest.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Sam for your time and comment..
Date: 1/19/2020 2:57:00 PM
Leaves much room for contemplation, which I always treasure in a poem. Best of luck in the contest, Jenish! Smiles, Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Gershon for your time and your kind words..
Date: 1/19/2020 1:55:00 PM
So deep and emotional, Jenish, beautiful write. Good luck in the contest.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your kind comment..
Date: 1/19/2020 7:49:00 AM
That photo tugs the heart and so does your poem, Jenish. All the best!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Vijay for your time to read and comment..
Date: 1/19/2020 5:30:00 AM
So masterfully done! You make it appear so easy yet, I have never tried! Beautiful dearest, Jenish in form and content!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 5:49:00 AM
As usual you inspired me with your pretty comment dear Demetrios.. Thanks..
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