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Floating On a Raft

Floating On A Raft Floating on a rickety old raft The water flows around me Silently it creates small eddies The water reflects the trees on the shore Such peace only miles from the city Could this be the Eden God promised? If it is I never want to leave Let the city go on its hectic way Please allow them to die at their own pace I just want to float here on my raft Looking at the sky and dreaming I don't want to go back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/8/2012 2:07:00 AM
a nice place to write a poem....so peaceful (^__^) love how you describe it....thanks for sharing. **Maria**
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Date: 9/7/2012 7:40:00 PM
sounds nice reminds me of bieing out with friends floating in the pool or ocean or creek.
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