Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Floating On a Breeze

Floating On A Breeze

Teasingly a breeze brushed 
across my cheek
Flowing through my hair as 
if wanting to speak
Then lifting me up with 
its gentle magic
Gently stroking my body 
so savory and sleek
As my body became 
weightless and weak
Snuggling my soul 
embracing I was meek
Flowing in sweet dips let 
me ride with ease
softest of whisper said 
it did tenderly tease
Soothingly tickling 
my essence to please
Removing my stress spoiling 
me in many degrees
A dreamy calm floats 
on the clouds seas
In a delicate nuance 
as troubles it did release

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John Fleming April 10, 2020 at 11:05 AM Hhmmm, another contest win I see...you certainly do rack them up, Poetess; I can full well understand why you finished at the top with this one...it certainly is slick, quick and very finely polished -- nicely contrived! With much affection. :) john Brenda Chiri May 1, 2020 at 4:57 AM Lol thank you John! All my affection!;)

Paul Callus April 7, 2020 at 10:59 AM Your delightful words have rubbed off on me, Brenda, and now I too feel like floating on a breeze! ~ Hope you are keeping well and safe, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:26 AM Paul what a pleasure having you stop by!;)

Sam Kauffman April 4, 2020 at 10:24 PM So delicate and winsome, Brenda. This poem just caresses the reader and invites us into the portrait of your romantic words. Congratulations dear friend on your first place win! So happy for you. Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:26 AM Sam thank you once again!:)

Vijay Pandit April 4, 2020 at 2:43 PM Tender and beautiful Brenda--congrats on yet another win at the TOP of #1. You rock my friend. Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:25 AM Vijay thank you I truly appreciate your stopping by!:)

L. J. Carber April 4, 2020 at 2:31 PM Very nice, very sweet, very lyrical! Congrats Brenda on your 1st place win! Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:25 AM Thank you so much LJ!;)

Curtis Johnson April 4, 2020 at 11:32 AM Congrats my friend. O soooo beautiful. This is great and powerful. Blessings. Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:23 AM Curtis thank you! I appreciate the read!;)

Susan Ashley April 4, 2020 at 10:26 AM Ah, my dear sweet sister, I am embraced by the magical beauty of your dreamy poem. Your enchanted pen has me floating on your every word. Such luscious poetry! You are a poetic enchantress, my talented twin! A tender captivating gem that sparkles with your beautiful artistry. I hope and pray that you and yours are all safe and healthy, my dear and precious twin sis. The Unicorns are getting restless with the stay at home orders.. they don't like being grounded..lol! Love and hugs always.. your sane sissy, Illum <3 Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:25 AM Ahh my dear Twinnie! I have missed you dear sister! Hope you and all yours are doing good and staying safe! Those unicorns have got to learn how to be more patient!;)

Rico Leffanta April 3, 2020 at 1:21 PM Soaring in the sky was Adam's dream, now Eve, too? Aloha! Rico Brenda Chiri April 4, 2020 at 7:29 AM Thank you Rico I appreciate that!;)