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Floating On a Breeze

Floating On A Breeze Teasingly a breeze brushed across my cheek Flowing through my hair as if wanting to speak Then lifting me up with its gentle magic Gently stroking my body so savory and sleek As my body became weightless and weak Snuggling my soul embracing I was meek Flowing in sweet dips let me ride with ease softest of whisper said it did tenderly tease Soothingly tickling my essence to please Removing my stress spoiling me in many degrees A dreamy calm floats on the clouds seas In a delicate nuance as troubles it did release

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Date: 4/10/2020 11:05:00 AM
Hhmmm, another contest win I see...you certainly do rack them up, Poetess; I can full well understand why you finished at the top with this one...it certainly is slick, quick and very finely polished -- nicely contrived! With much affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/1/2020 4:57:00 AM
Lol thank you John! All my affection!;)
Date: 4/7/2020 10:59:00 AM
Your delightful words have rubbed off on me, Brenda, and now I too feel like floating on a breeze! ~ Hope you are keeping well and safe, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:26:00 AM
Paul what a pleasure having you stop by!;)
Date: 4/4/2020 10:24:00 PM
So delicate and winsome, Brenda. This poem just caresses the reader and invites us into the portrait of your romantic words. Congratulations dear friend on your first place win! So happy for you.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:26:00 AM
Sam thank you once again!:)
Date: 4/4/2020 2:43:00 PM
Tender and beautiful Brenda--congrats on yet another win at the TOP of #1. You rock my friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:25:00 AM
Vijay thank you I truly appreciate your stopping by!:)
Date: 4/4/2020 2:31:00 PM
Very nice, very sweet, very lyrical! Congrats Brenda on your 1st place win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:25:00 AM
Thank you so much LJ!;)
Date: 4/4/2020 11:32:00 AM
Congrats my friend. O soooo beautiful. This is great and powerful. Blessings.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:23:00 AM
Curtis thank you! I appreciate the read!;)
Date: 4/4/2020 10:26:00 AM
Ah, my dear sweet sister, I am embraced by the magical beauty of your dreamy poem. Your enchanted pen has me floating on your every word. Such luscious poetry! You are a poetic enchantress, my talented twin! A tender captivating gem that sparkles with your beautiful artistry. I hope and pray that you and yours are all safe and healthy, my dear and precious twin sis. The Unicorns are getting restless with the stay at home orders.. they don't like being grounded..lol! Love and hugs always.. your sane sissy, Illum <3
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:25:00 AM
Ahh my dear Twinnie! I have missed you dear sister! Hope you and all yours are doing good and staying safe! Those unicorns have got to learn how to be more patient!;)
Date: 4/3/2020 1:21:00 PM
Soaring in the sky was Adam's dream, now Eve, too? Aloha! Rico
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/4/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Rico I appreciate that!;)

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