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Floating Free

Out on the water's where I'd like to be, in a boat, on a float, wild and free. Winding down from the days rush, catching breeze's tender touch. Warmed by the sun's beaming glow, my smile abides the ebb and flow. With waves lapping at the seams, I'm lulled away to drift and dream. And while birds sing my soul alive for a moment, I too soar the sky. TLH © 12-19-2012

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Date: 3/11/2013 6:05:00 PM
Tanya, this is a great example in putting the reader into the poem. I was so caught up I got sunburn..... Love ya..... Jake
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Date: 1/25/2013 9:30:00 PM
this is a gorgeous little poem of yours I never saw before. Very soothing one!
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Date: 1/1/2013 2:22:00 PM
Tanya , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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Date: 12/27/2012 12:44:00 PM
So bouncy and free !! Love it !!
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Date: 12/21/2012 1:46:00 PM
Spread your wings and go , how I would love that , nicely done xx
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Date: 12/21/2012 1:18:00 PM
oh to be a bird. Can you imagine. Enjoyed reading your poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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