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Floater

My eye produced a floater And although it felt quite weird, It wasn’t quite as dangerous As I, at first, had feared. The vitreous inside the eye (A jelly-seeming goop) Becomes, as we grow older, Less like Jello, more like soup. Then little teeny fibers Clump together in your eye, Casting shadows on the retina As they go drifting by. A floater’s shape can vary So it’s no surprise that mine Resembled, like a pencil stroke, A skinny curvy line. It danced across my vision From the left side to the right, Interfering with my reading And imbuing me with fright. Though the doctor called it normal, For it happens as we age, I don’t need a new reminder That I’m at that later stage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/1/2014 7:24:00 AM
Is it age or life style? I don't know. For me it began years ago that they began to show. And now I can't remember the last one that I had. Now it's stye's and ingrown lashes that make me feel so bad. It's always sompn' huh? :) Peace. :)
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Date: 10/26/2014 12:06:00 PM
frightening thing, Ilene. And frightening how all these little new things happening to our bodies is a horrible reminder of what is to come. CAn they help get rid of this floater? I mean, do they just stay and then disappear?? I had spots on my pupil, from my contacts not being properly cleaned. So I switched to this cleaning solution that stores the contacts and cleans them at same time. I hopefully don't have those spots on my eye any more. GReat poem.
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Date: 10/26/2014 4:18:00 AM
Very enjoyable write, Ilene! On seeing the title I thought it was something to do with floating voters! So far I have not experienced floaters, but now I can watch out for any:) ...age too is running after me! // paul
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:31:00 PM
Excellent write Ilene highlighting the importance of getting these things checked out:-) hugs Jan xxx
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