Floatation Device

From the first filling nascent puff
love’s breath buoyed a ring, filial…
 
Onward floating where the hearts go
and hands cling during a stormy sea ~ 
To lift the sinking 'n offer benevolent 
anodyne alms easing terrors of aqua
threatening to drown in bereavement ...

Inflated again, waits for a tsunami
on which to ride to placid scenario…

New waves toss and turn till benign ~

Deflated many times when pierced,
ended ties that stabbed once/twice… 

Voyaging closely, my true two of luv…
In their re-inflating exhales, have I
come afloat again to remain kinetic
evermore, as their floatation device ~

(8/21/2022 - For 'The Meaning of Love' Contest)
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:47 PM
The meaning of love becomes subjective and unique to the beholder Susan. Your poem displays this brilliantly in metaphors of the sea. Congratulations on your deserving First place win. Blessings xxoo
Woodrow Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Thank you very much, Connie :)
Anaya Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your First Place! Love your take on it. The metaphors used are creative and love has gotten through the storm! You are unique Susan! ~Anaya
Woodrow Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 8:21 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya :)
Sambourne Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Such a fine extended metaphor - from sea, to buoyant waves to flotation salvation. Congratulations on an original poem that highlights love - sea worthy + resilient. Best wishes, Brian
Woodrow Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, Brian …what hasn’t been said of love? :)
Mcconnell Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 1:37 PM
Lovely penning Susan, with good imagery and expression. Take care, Gordon
Woodrow Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Gordon. Glad you liked it :)
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