Flirting Boyfriend

Giggling Girty became quite shirty
When her boyfriend was acting flirty,
With a handful of mud 
Delivered with an awful thud
Her boyfriend is now dizzy and dirty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:39 PM
G'day John... doesn't Girty know that mud is good for the complexion. Perhaps the delivery might have been a bit forceful - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 3:34 AM
Girty doesn't realise Lindsay--she's only 9-or there abouts. ....thanks again Lindsay------kind regards------John
Nunez Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:56 AM
3x smile
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:57 AM
Oh, I see---thanks Kim.......John
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:20 AM
This jerks at our funny bone in more innocent fun with words. The premiss and story line presented is humorous and strikes a cord of familiarity in our collective memories and hearts. Emile.
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:55 AM
Hello Emile, Yes Emile, we all have some memories similar. Glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by----John
Nunez Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 9:45 AM
:-)))
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:53 AM
Hello Kim, Not sure what you mean with the strokes, I hope you liked it. .......kind regards-----John
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:59 PM
I enjoyed this one, John!
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:56 AM
Thanks for having a read Jan....John
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:55 AM
Thanks Andrea for your lovely comment.....kind regards-----John
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:48 AM
lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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