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Flirting Boyfriend

Giggling Girty became quite shirty When her boyfriend was acting flirty, With a handful of mud Delivered with an awful thud Her boyfriend is now dizzy and dirty.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/11/2015 8:39:00 PM

G'day John... doesn't Girty know that mud is good for the complexion. Perhaps the delivery might have been a bit forceful - Lindsay

John Williams
Date: 8/12/2015 3:34:00 AM

Girty doesn't realise Lindsay--she's only 9-or there abouts. ....thanks again Lindsay------kind regards------John

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/10/2015 3:56:00 AM

3x smile

John Williams
Date: 8/10/2015 3:57:00 AM

Oh, I see---thanks Kim.......John

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/9/2015 11:20:00 AM

This jerks at our funny bone in more innocent fun with words. The premiss and story line presented is humorous and strikes a cord of familiarity in our collective memories and hearts. Emile.

John Williams
Date: 8/10/2015 3:55:00 AM

Hello Emile, Yes Emile, we all have some memories similar. Glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by----John

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/8/2015 9:45:00 AM

:-)))

John Williams
Date: 8/10/2015 3:53:00 AM

Hello Kim, Not sure what you mean with the strokes, I hope you liked it. .......kind regards-----John