Flirtations

She flirted with me, this lady so fair She left with a smile, Seductive her stare I saw her one day So golden her hair I walked towards her - Her husband was there 11-15-19 Mcwhirtle Me Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 1:58:00 PM

the twist at the ending sure made me smile Joseph, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 9:31:00 AM

LOL- Love the ending. SURPRIZE! lmao. Great write, Joseph. Congratulations on your win and Happy Holidays.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/1/2019 9:02:00 AM

What a wonderful write! Funny ending!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/18/2019 1:00:00 PM

Some woman encourage men to flirt, however, it can turn into an embarrassing situation! I do love your poem, because it is so true! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/17/2019 5:35:00 PM

it happens i suppose, i have a neighbor like her....can only imagine the look on her face when you walked towards her...good write...best wishes in the contest! hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/17/2019 3:40:00 PM

This kind of thing happens all the time to those unaware. It would be a terrible shock to have all hope ripped award like that, embarrassing too. Well conveyed Joseph! Best for a contest win! : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2019 10:18:00 AM

oh wow, now you have my interest perked. I need to find out about this form!! WEll done, Joseph.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/16/2019 10:39:00 PM

I like this one, Joseph, good ending. Good luck in the contest.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/16/2019 5:37:00 PM

Ah, tsk tsk, though it was , a beaut of a poem

Silent One

Date: 11/16/2019 12:07:00 PM

Oh... The one thE one that got away...I like how you did it..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/15/2019 11:20:00 PM

Sometimes that happens. You have expressed this so well, in just a few words. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/15/2019 12:40:00 PM

This made me smile. Fun to read!

Na Na

Date: 11/15/2019 12:36:00 PM

Hi Joseph wonderful write. I`m glad you were able to see her again. I imagine what went on in her mind when she saw you. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest

Midnight Aurora

Date: 11/15/2019 11:07:00 AM

Lol...that's too bad. Fun write!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/15/2019 10:33:00 AM

A fun read, Joseph--loved the ending.