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Flirtations

 She flirted with me,
 this lady so fair
 She left with a smile,
 Seductive her stare

 I saw her one day
 So golden her hair
 I walked towards her -
 Her husband was there
 
 11-15-19
 Mcwhirtle Me Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Charles Messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/26/2019 1:58:00 PM
the twist at the ending sure made me smile Joseph, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2019 9:31:00 AM
LOL- Love the ending. SURPRIZE! lmao. Great write, Joseph. Congratulations on your win and Happy Holidays.
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Date: 12/1/2019 9:02:00 AM
What a wonderful write! Funny ending!
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Date: 11/23/2019 3:59:00 AM
Good fun, Joseph.
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Date: 11/18/2019 1:00:00 PM
Some woman encourage men to flirt, however, it can turn into an embarrassing situation! I do love your poem, because it is so true! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/17/2019 5:35:00 PM
it happens i suppose, i have a neighbor like her....can only imagine the look on her face when you walked towards her...good write...best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Date: 11/17/2019 3:40:00 PM
This kind of thing happens all the time to those unaware. It would be a terrible shock to have all hope ripped award like that, embarrassing too. Well conveyed Joseph! Best for a contest win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 11/17/2019 10:18:00 AM
oh wow, now you have my interest perked. I need to find out about this form!! WEll done, Joseph.
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Date: 11/16/2019 10:39:00 PM
I like this one, Joseph, good ending. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/16/2019 5:37:00 PM
Ah, tsk tsk, though it was , a beaut of a poem
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Date: 11/16/2019 12:07:00 PM
Oh... The one thE one that got away...I like how you did it..
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:20:00 PM
Sometimes that happens. You have expressed this so well, in just a few words. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/15/2019 1:09:00 PM
Oopsy! Short and very sweet. Although you might have got eaten up. Which isn’t sweet.
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Date: 11/15/2019 12:40:00 PM
This made me smile. Fun to read!
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Date: 11/15/2019 12:36:00 PM
Hi Joseph wonderful write. I`m glad you were able to see her again. I imagine what went on in her mind when she saw you. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:27:00 AM
Fun or sad? I wonder. Your short poem is well constructed with great contrast.
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:07:00 AM
Lol...that's too bad. Fun write!
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Date: 11/15/2019 10:33:00 AM
A fun read, Joseph--loved the ending.
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