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Flipping Memories

watching wild geese drift, old lady on porch sips tea as nightfall grows pale... thumbs browse sepia album flipping memories of youth 5 Lines Max Contest for Rick Parise

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/6/2016 5:43:00 PM

I loved the picture your piece created in my mind!! Congrats Nette, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Augustus Black

Date: 11/6/2016 3:14:00 AM

Wow! Just lovely... I like this. I felt great imaginary and also little sadness because the days youth will never come back. Wonderful poem. Congratulation for 3rd Rank. 7

Sonia Walker

Date: 11/5/2016 6:24:00 PM

Nette, I enjoyed reading your poem, 'Flipping Memories.' Congratulations on your gold placement. ~ Sonia

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2016 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations for this nice poem!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/5/2016 5:02:00 PM

A lovely, melancholy picture you painted in so few words, Nette. Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France

Date: 11/5/2016 4:37:00 PM

Nette congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem ~

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/5/2016 3:03:00 PM

I love it! Congrats, Nette! VMB

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/5/2016 3:04:00 PM

I typed VMB in the "Validate" box above. It showed up here.???? Janice

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:43:00 AM

Wow that's lovely Nette! Congrats on huge win!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/5/2014 9:12:00 AM

Excellent. I love it I would have it tied with numbered wins. Unimportant. A great read for me. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2014 8:24:00 AM

Ahh!! Sweet memories that are on the winners' list..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2014 9:58:00 PM

this is fantastic, Nette. Too bad there were only three number placements!!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 6:54:00 PM

Well done Nettie. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 4:34:00 PM

lovely imagery Nette congrats on your HM:-) hugs jan xx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/19/2014 6:41:00 AM

Beautiful images. I love the 'winter air heaves', such vibrant description.

Ken Carroll

Date: 4/15/2014 9:30:00 PM

Nice poem of reminiscing Nette!

Amelie Mara

Date: 4/15/2014 2:32:00 PM

I like it when poetry affects me like this piece of writing does. We age like wine and wisdom goes with it. I admire this work of art!

Leon Datu

Date: 4/15/2014 1:31:00 PM

Goodness! this is achingly beautiful. The age matter really sucked me in, great title, intro, progression, epiphany.. Brilliant poem, Nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2014 1:15:00 PM

- Nice to scroll back ... in the "book of life" - Lovely tanka poem, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/15/2014 1:01:00 PM

Great tanka, nette, where every word has a function in passing on the message. What we have left in old age are the memories.....this goes in my favs :) // paul

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/15/2014 12:38:00 PM

Oh.. this so lovely, nette... :O) The moment of throwing back on our youth days...such a pleasure and serenity on your write... kudos!! ^_^ :O)