Beata Agustin Poet Dodoitsu

FLIGHT WITH MY CHILD

Vroom-vroom with my special child
Zooming high in his plane-car
Hep-hurray! He’s the pilot…
Bless our flight*, Lord. Vroom!*Deuteronomy 32:30 How should one chase a thousand, and two put ten thousand to flight, except their Rock had sold them, and the LORD had shut them up?

April 5, 2024
1st place, "Vo dee oh doe" Dodoitsu Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues; judged on 5/28/2024

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Sara Kendrick May 31, 2024 at 10:59 AM Nice to see the winners' list with your name on it and also, see what everyone else wrote for the contest. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen May 30, 2024 at 1:39 AM - "Hep-hurray!" - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Beata :) - hugs

Terry Miller May 29, 2024 at 8:34 AM Joyful and cute, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues May 28, 2024 at 9:01 PM The joy is palpable, Beata! Lots of action and excitement…your love of your “special child” is felt. Congrats!