Flight of the Swallow

From the chartreuse scene to a dusty bronze land.
This the sky’s calling for their wings to soar, to disband.
The sun is their shadow, they bathe in her honey-stained glory.
Under the silence of the stars, they never surrender their flight story.

The days are long, they travel beyond all rhyme or reason
This is their journey, in life and in season.
Fragile hearts drum on in tawny twilight.
From feathered soldiers by day, to winged spectres of night.

Come morning, they are ushered, ablaze by warm, crimson skies 
In earthly kingdoms below, they are but the envy of every land creature’s eyes.

The compass points north, over mountain and rooftop they climb.
Beyond sun kissed valleys and storm swept seas they glide.
This the tale of the swallow, for in every heart of one, they do lovingly sing.
A voyage of courage is what the swallow bird does bring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 8:39 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Bowring Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 8:38 AM
This is a wonderful very poetic poem Charlie. I love the title too. Lovely imagery’ The sun is their shadow, they bathe in her honey- stained glory’ ‘Beyond sun kissed valleys and storm swept seas they glide’. Glorious! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Look forward to reading more from you :)
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September 19, 2023 at 9:45 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I am currently working on a debut anthology which tells the seasons of my life and from the perspective of being neurodiverse and this poem belongs in Spring. :) I have many poems and this forum is a good soundboard to gather feedback before I attempt to publish. So thanks for your review.
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