Nette Onclaud Poet Senryu

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Flight of Stars and Sun

flight of three stars leads

    Philippines’ honor and zest…
  
   waving our sun’s grace



Contest: In 3 lines, represent 
your Country or State flag
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Sponsor: SKAT   7/22/2015

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Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2015 at 9:07 PM Nette, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem has been an honor to read. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2015 at 10:55 PM yours is so pretty, Nette. Love the poem AND the flag picture. Congrats.

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 5:58 PM a lovely haiku many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez July 24, 2015 at 12:48 PM Back to congratulate you, Nette! You did us proud! happy to see our flag up there, huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 23, 2015 at 10:42 PM Wonderful haiku nette! Congrats on big win! Love the expressions of honour n zest!

Skat A July 23, 2015 at 7:58 PM Congratulations, NETTE :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS, It's an honor to have your haiku in my contest. Forever **SKAT**

Laura Leiser July 23, 2015 at 2:46 PM What a beautiful flag you have in the Philippines, Nette! One of my closest friends is from the Philippines, and she recently went back to see her family after several years away. She is so sweet (probably like you, I imagine) :)

Constance La France July 22, 2015 at 3:18 PM Nette, such a beautiful flag and write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I breathed. .

Noel Villarosa July 21, 2015 at 11:42 PM A lovely verse to read and show our dear Philippine flag. Filipinos take pride for our flag flies proudly to represent the sacrifices of all brave men and women who gave their lives for the freedom we are now enjoying. 7 (^_^) Noel.

Casarah Nance July 21, 2015 at 8:37 PM Nicely done! I like that, the flight of stars and sun, because when the flag waves it is a flight, proud like your words.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 21, 2015 at 5:50 PM Long live Philippines and its people! Excellent work dear Nette. Good luck!

Afolabi Muideen July 21, 2015 at 3:51 PM A wonderful piece here, I hope this win the contest, Philippines is indeed a great country........A.M.

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2015 at 3:41 PM Very descriptive of the flag..A very good design and colorful flag..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Rhoma Em July 21, 2015 at 3:31 PM The pride of a nation flows through you and your illustrious poem!

Eileen Manassian July 21, 2015 at 2:01 PM Good luck in the contest, Nette. This is a beauty.

Franco Gonza July 21, 2015 at 1:33 PM Hail to the emblem that glows and bears the beauty of your land. Your poetry excels!

Lycia Harding July 21, 2015 at 12:46 PM Oh, I like this! Beautiful, informative and patriotic. Good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2015 at 12:40 PM - Your flag with pride! - Beautiful at the blue sky! - Good luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez July 21, 2015 at 12:29 PM A beaut! :-))) Um, since you and Aiyah both entered our flag, I'll just support you guys, haha! huggs