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Flies On Silent Wings

. Gold Finch quietly Grasp Rubeckia's stem feeds... Flies on silent wings

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Date: 8/4/2010 8:21:00 PM
aw just imagining that bird just to glimpse some seeds and fly away, lovely haiku
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:57:00 PM
Love that last line, SAra. Is it for Silence contest? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:13:00 PM
cute write!
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Date: 8/4/2010 2:00:00 PM
Very well written Haiku. very enjoyed.. always Michael
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:08:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:25:00 AM
I love the images in this one Sara, tc Wilma
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Date: 8/4/2010 2:16:00 AM
into the wild wonder no doubt. love this Sara, good luck in the contest if entered. Harry
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Date: 8/3/2010 9:49:00 PM
How very lovely! Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 8/3/2010 7:39:00 PM
If for Rick's contest good luck.. your title is a real eye catcher... enjoyed a most creative and interesting write..with luv..
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:58:00 PM
Very expressive images and perfect haiku
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:41:00 PM
beautiful image here, nicely crafted and a joy to read. :) hugs, kris
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:25:00 PM
befudled. john
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:05:00 PM
This is a great Haiku Sara, a pleasure to read ! TY james
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Date: 8/3/2010 3:46:00 PM
What a lovely image of the finch, Sara. I'm not familiar with the rubeckia, but imagine it is a nourishing flower, perhaps like a hummingbird bush. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/3/2010 3:22:00 PM
Dear Sara Such a Perfect Haiku Did YOU study the Art of Haiku Have You ever Been to Japan Superbly Done Complete YOU are a Pleasure to read So is Doris LOVE ALWAYS...HG -- Sara I hope this Finds YOU and YOURS Healthy, Prosperous, and in the Spirit Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments YOUR POETIC WISDOM Astounding
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Date: 8/3/2010 2:06:00 PM
Oh Sara, this is outstanding! I love the imagery. Thank you for your kind remarks on my Italy poem. Aloha, Connie
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