Flies

Diaphnanous singing in the sizzling heat
The white maggots turn black with wings
Dead flesh melts through a solvent treat
Festering on wounds of paupers and of kings

Something more here than this pesty buzzing song
Some deep possession ladles joy
In an office so darkly wrong
The gift to heal, mostly maligned will destroy

Even the parting prayer of a poet
Waiting for her Charon to come
Becomes their carrion before the last breath:
Pale page closed on that plagued kingdom

For every one a thousand more eyes lens us
Wing throated monsters full of crave
Sees us and everything as sweet detritus
And mark our channel to the grave

From their choir superior triumph rings
Over man, these our flitting foes
They live a lunar cycle, yet conquer kings
Time's brevity no meekness shows

I study flies to tell the epitaph's gall
We measured out on spooning tongues
We, locked in vanity on the spining ball
Hear their wet buzzing in our lungs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/28/2010 6:39:00 AM
An interesting topic you've done a poem on, not many are brave enough to chose this, It paints a picture that has a different view on animal we view as a pain. Well written thank you for your comment Crystal ~X~
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:19:00 AM
This is an usual topic that you have chosen..I like the line "Time's brevity no meekness shows"..So wonderful that we have an eternal body that will love forever..Your presence at my work gave a breath of fresh air to my spirit..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:47:00 AM
Allusion, alliterations, vivid rhymes, history, mythology and religion, David you did everything with this ... and more, for it is masterful write that dissect and pedestal the fly. I love it, David
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