Flickers

Hold me close while shadows elongate, swaying to the tune of flickers. Heartened whispers luminice. Kisses strum makeshift acoustics, broadcasts of cryptic light. 6-9-2021 Waltz Wave Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/26/2021 5:37:00 PM

A lovely romantic waltz wave, Juliet! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/10/2021 3:48:00 AM

Beautifully done. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/10/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thanks, Regina. This was a fun form to try.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/9/2021 7:40:00 PM

This is such a pretty 'Waltz Wave,' Juliet. G.L. in the contest! Dance til Dawn, Gershon

Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/10/2021 8:39:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. My writing energy is going into the garden this time of year, but I thought I'd give this short form a try.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/9/2021 8:56:00 AM

Nice work, Juliet. I certainly enjoyed reading it.

Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/10/2021 8:37:00 AM

Thanks, L. Milton. My inspiration for writing is coming to an end, but I had time for something short.