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Flickering Dreams Beneath Stars

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Written: February 1st, 2025 For contest by Sponsored by: Brian Strand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tethered to a wick, flickering in orbit, carnelian and velvet flute notes swirl. Amber sparks rise and swarm. Gold and glories cavort, while a sable-zaffre shroud is weaving graffiti, The candle's lambent light casts the shadows. Opals float akin to petals in a cesspool, triggering thoughts of scarlet shift, as coppery sensations escape their chains. Shelves push against a bound bosom. Creativity exhales smoke and throws. while maples' sway ruins bibliophilic dreams. Rhapsody strikes with a sigh of melodic delight. shining coldly, like winter's moonlight. whirling shadows and crimson angels, as eventide-colored darts whistle on ledges. Candelabras wear cardigans as gaunt sailors. And garrulous flames tell tales of gossamer nights. Vivid, sprawling thoughts and tangled ideas emerge, from a nexus of opia and kuebiko's kenopsia; exulansis, This blazing pyre is shadowed by slipshod stupidity. Seraphic moments—a sylph-like eudaemonia whisper of Virtuous knowledge whispers umpteen realities. Onism turns a mere blip in liberosis dreams, Blazing a trail of endless adventures! Altschmerz soothes sonder in occhiolism reveries. Epiphany shines pure, like the aurora elixir. Monachopsis leaves views, and kenopsia fades—a balm, Ethereal panacea from unseen yet deeply felt nodes. Vivid yet deep colors echo the pain of the moment. It enables us to view life through a cosmic lens. Maples sway melodically under the moon’s glow,— their frosty sheen bestows grace light plays across the frozen ground, creating fleeting beauty.

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Date: 2/10/2025 10:48:00 AM
SP, you more than any poet I've read has a visionary perspective and mood. It almost strikes me a little trippy. This is a beautiful way to look at the universe and live in the moment. It may help people experience life each day in a better mood. The choice of music you selected doesn't hurt either!!! The transitions at 3:30 and 4:33 gives me a shot of contrast with what came before. Smiles! Hope you are really feeling great!
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Date: 2/4/2025 1:05:00 PM
- Beautifully written ... all the sentences are woven in the most beautiful silk and shines pure, like the aurora elixir :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 2/3/2025 8:19:00 PM
"Candelabras wear cardigans as gaunt sailors. And garrulous flames tell tales of gossamer nights." Lovely lines. Once again I stumble upon the pile of words, one may find only in a lexicon. I simply stay wide mouthed at your range of vocabulary. "Rhapsody strikes with a sigh of melodic delight. shining coldly, like winter's moonlight." Another set of lovely lines. All the Best, dear Lasaad.
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:10:00 PM
A very artistic poem this is dr sotto, so many word pairings that made me pause and think, and i love also how youv written "Epiphany shines pure, like the aurora elixir. Monachopsis leaves views, and kenopsia fades—a balm, Ethereal panacea from unseen yet deeply felt nodes. Vivid yet deep colors echo the pain of the moment." Your way with expressing is so descriptive and has unique diction which stands out! I love again the flow of this and how youv ended this poem! Pleasure reading. Sending you light always
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