Fleur De L'Amour

Merely, till an essence With just a look To liberate impressions Let loose with sparks Of passion’s love Where seedlings shall begin to grow A renaissance of emotions From deep within Allowing, flowering into blossoms Amid a mere forgotten Hollowed heart Unto undiscovered places Sprouting to near higher heights Nourishing the under root Into undiscovered parts If merely to partake of light Petals along a trellis searching Until anew, blooming life imparts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Writing in archaic English takes an effort understand how to conjugate the verbs & the accurate use of the pronouns thee thou thine etc. Your contest winners did not conjugate correctly which is fine if that wasn't the contests main request. If everyone did it more or less wrong it would have been kind to give out at least 10 ranks? I would have wrote you in soup mail but you don't have it, sorry..I will remove this if you like just soup mail me.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 11:15 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
Austin Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 2:44 PM
"Nourishing the under root into undiscovered parts." I like it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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