Flesh, Resurrected

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When hunchbacked skulls drip of shrapnel stains
Of raked life quilted with torn-out noises, 
Watery clay defrosts past maimed pains 
As silk skies reap a smudge of roses  

Of raked life quilted with torn-out noises
How shells tremble to resurrect flesh,  
As silk skies reap a smudge of roses 
Birthing ligaments meeting frail breath 

How shells tremble to resurrect flesh 
Watery clay defrosts past maimed pains, 
Birthing ligaments meeting frail breath  
When hunchbacked skulls drip of murky stains



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Such chiffon night  in serenade’s hue;
Littered with stars, orchestrating songs
Awakened bones form in spiral blue,
Stretching eyes grow frocked bodies of dawns

Littered with stars, orchestrating songs 
Another sequel of twilight’s  flight,
Stretching eyes grow frocked bodies of dawns 
A white mist shimmers fermented light

Another sequel of twilight’s  flight 
Awakened bones form in spiral blue, 
A white mist shimmers fermented light 
Such chiffon night, in serenade’s hue 

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:21 AM
Congrats on your superb write n top place win nette!
Walker  Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your 1st place win! Verlena
Y. Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Nette, congratulations on your 1st place win. :-)Alexis
United Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 10:41 AM
The imagery takes my breath away Nette - outstanding poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Liwayway Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 10:53 AM
congratulations Nette..this is an excellent poem..Have a nice day!! **Mary**
Okonkwo Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 8:12 PM
Congrats, Nette, on a well-deserved win. One Love~O.O.
Goudreau Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 5:13 PM
Amazing and beautifully executed. A masterpiece well deserving of the win. Congratulations Nette!
Phookan Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Dear nette, hey wonderful lady,how are you?just now i was telling nikko that i'm not forgetting her, neither am i forgetting you, but i miss very much reading your beautiful poems...Super Congrats on your very well deserved win!! Love always and God bless in your endeavours towards making this world a happy place, gautami
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 5:04 AM
((())) Clap! Clap! Congrats..Sara
Agtani Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Nette What an intricate lines of poetry! I followed every line and I have to go back to the title to remind me of the message you want to share. I am so delighted to see you and Nikko up there in the list of winners! March on! Love Dalila
Stanley Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:50 PM
Absolutely wonderful, Nette. Beautiful imagery throughout, congratulations on you big win, Greg
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Wow Nette-I'm so impressed! Each line was almost more impressive then the last-I wish I knew how you came up with this type of material! A huge congrats. from me!
Song Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Hey! Belated birthday gift for the BIRTHDAY GIRL!!! Congrats to you, NETTE! This is filled with beautiful imagery ...love "another sequel of twilight's flight"..powerful lines, darling. You give the sky and night a whole new facelift here! Love, Gwendolen
K. Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:00 PM
You definitely showed your wonderful talent here, nette! Super congrats on your win with this double pantuom! Hindi pa rin ako naka-try magsulat nito, you sure did an amazing job here, and lemme kidnap, whooty whoots for you! Tama ba?! Way to go to you!! hugs :D
K. Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:01 PM
btw, hahaha you are soo funny, dinugo ka ba sa contest ko? sorry! hehe. my sister to blame... nabasa ko pa somewhere na sabi mo you ha a terrible time, oops!! ayaw mo nun, mind workout :) heehee
Freeman Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Nette, My dear, pleasure to see your win, my friend, A big "Congratulations" Beautiful and worthy poem win. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:03 AM
A thrilling poem, and a wonderful win, Nette!!! You are a stunning, a wonderful writer, that takes our breaths away!! Congratulations!
Horsman Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:45 AM
wonderful and congratulations on your placement. so moving is this. harry
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations on your 4th place win in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Nette. Love, Carol
Mantle Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 3:32 AM
Congrats on your win. Best wishes Em :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 2:08 AM
Congratulation on your wondefrul win x
Nair Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 12:28 AM
Congrats on this well deserved win..
A   Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:03 PM
Nette ;-) A wonderful poem, and win.. congratulations with your awesome verse...always,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Wonderful win, Nette. A BIG congratulations to you. YOu must celebrate and be a queen tonight!!
Merryman Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Congrats on your 4th place win in the PS contest. Great job! Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 7:28 PM
Ahhh chiffon nights! A mysterious and deeply felt write colored with the brush of an artist. Congrad's Light & Love
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