Fleeting Moment

Time is endless - that’s what they say! When I meet you, in the gossamer amber twilight... sun leaving, painting the sky with a glistening vermillion aura, feels like the clock is ticking, the moment is fleeting, too fast! golden past feels celestially poignant and eternal, never escapes my crimson mind... present is intoxicating and infinite, Never loses its blazing, limitless charm! A Strand - 1069 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/11/2022 11:30:00 AM

My friend, you do have an artist's gift for incorporating color imagery in your poems! Love the way you masterfully blend the shades and hues into striking, unforgettable images. Congratulations on your first place win! Sending you much love and many blessings dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2022 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Time has away of playing games on us. Have a great/blessed day...............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/9/2022 8:04:00 PM

"present is intoxicating and infinite" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2022 1:38:00 PM

Sunsets are timeless and remain in the mind. This is beautiful Mala. Congratulations on having it on the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo

Neva Romaine

Date: 2/9/2022 8:38:00 AM

Dear Malabika, Congratulations on your win in the contest!. This is a beautiful work of art. Be Blessed, Neva

Valsa George

Date: 2/8/2022 7:36:00 PM

Present is what matters. If it is intoxicating , future is assured ! Beautifully rendered Mala

John Lawless

Date: 2/8/2022 4:59:00 PM

and too soothes memories float into twilight....Very nicely done Malabika

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2022 5:57:00 PM

Thanks, John, for dropping by. Really appreciate your beautiful comment.