Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

Fleeting Moment

Time is endless - that’s what they say! 

                                    When I meet you, 
                           in the gossamer amber twilight...
                             sun leaving, painting the sky 
                          with a glistening vermillion aura, 
                            feels like the clock is ticking, 
                                the moment is fleeting, 
                                          too fast! 

                    golden past feels celestially poignant and eternal, 
                             never escapes my crimson mind... 
                            present is intoxicating and infinite, 
                         Never loses its blazing, limitless charm! 


                             A Strand - 1069 Poetry Contest 
                                   Sponsor: Brian Strand
                                         FIRST PLACE

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Sam Kauffman February 11, 2022 at 11:30 AM My friend, you do have an artist's gift for incorporating color imagery in your poems! Love the way you masterfully blend the shades and hues into striking, unforgettable images. Congratulations on your first place win! Sending you much love and many blessings dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith February 10, 2022 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Time has away of playing games on us. Have a great/blessed day...............

Christuraj Alex February 9, 2022 at 8:04 PM "present is intoxicating and infinite" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong February 9, 2022 at 1:38 PM Sunsets are timeless and remain in the mind. This is beautiful Mala. Congratulations on having it on the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo

Neva Romaine February 9, 2022 at 8:38 AM Dear Malabika, Congratulations on your win in the contest!. This is a beautiful work of art. Be Blessed, Neva

Valsa George February 8, 2022 at 7:36 PM Present is what matters. If it is intoxicating , future is assured ! Beautifully rendered Mala

John Lawless February 8, 2022 at 4:59 PM and too soothes memories float into twilight....Very nicely done Malabika Malabika Ray Choudhury February 8, 2022 at 5:57 PM Thanks, John, for dropping by. Really appreciate your beautiful comment.