Paul Callus Poet Free verse

Fleeting Inspiration

Clad in flowing purple
Like a full-bodied
Cabernet Sauvignon
She vanishes into the 
Shadows of the night
While I stand alone, 
Dreamily savouring 
The lingering aftertaste
Of her aromatic kiss. 

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© September, 2018
    Inspired by RS

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Vladislav Raven October 20, 2018 at 3:21 PM Hi Paul, this is such a wonderful, creative write from your pen. The words excite the imagination. The images flow so easily within the mind. Your creativity shines in this excellent write Paul. This is a fave. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike. Paul Callus October 20, 2018 at 4:11 PM Today we've had several pleasant poetic exchanges, my friend:) Thank you for the interest, support and encouragement...and the fav! Enjoy the weekend, Mike. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos October 11, 2018 at 12:55 AM Hi Paul, A seductive poem and a great write. Regards, Jennifer. Paul Callus October 11, 2018 at 9:35 AM Thank you, Jennifer; glad you enjoyed! Regards // paul

Funom Makama September 27, 2018 at 12:57 PM Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this. Paul Callus September 27, 2018 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Funom; pleased to see you back in action. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley September 23, 2018 at 4:56 PM It seems like you enjoyed your favorite ravishing red with the beauty of your passionate pen, my dear friend... I savor the dreamy moments with you, Paul. A nuanced and lovely write with a perfect title as well. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan Paul Callus September 24, 2018 at 11:41 AM Thank you for sharing these dreamy moments with me, Susan...perhaps I ought to open and share with you a bottle of red Cabernet Sauvignon:) Cheers...hugs and warm regards, my friend. // paul

Pashang Salehi September 22, 2018 at 9:18 PM Excellent. Well penned... Paul Callus September 23, 2018 at 4:59 AM Thank you, Pashang. Best regards // paul

Viv Wigley September 22, 2018 at 1:28 AM Rich and sensuous, Paul, Maltese nights are a fine inspiration. Excellent little write. Regards, Viv Paul Callus September 22, 2018 at 6:52 AM Thank you, Viv. Could be hard to sleep in hot Maltese nights, so why not take the opportunity to put pen to paper! Regards // paul

Winged Warrior September 21, 2018 at 11:48 AM Awesome write my friend...love & light...^WW^ Paul Callus September 21, 2018 at 4:35 PM Thank you, WW. Best regards to you, my friend. // paul

Carole Duet September 20, 2018 at 6:32 PM Oh sooo romantic, Paul. Love this. FAVED

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh September 19, 2018 at 10:27 PM What the romantic mind felt when she left? The answer makes the poem more beautiful. Paul Callus September 20, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thank you for commenting, Akham. All feedback is appreciated. Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham September 19, 2018 at 2:33 AM A lovely romantic image you have created Paul. Tom Paul Callus September 19, 2018 at 1:13 PM Glad you like it, Tom...thank you. Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri September 19, 2018 at 1:00 AM Unreachable beauty with a "lingering" beautiful work of art! Like waking in the morn with a heart full with the bliss of a wonderful dream! Inspiringly amazing Paul. A joy to read. Best regards. Be blessed always. Paul Callus September 19, 2018 at 12:46 PM Your beautiful comments are always cherished by me, dear Besma! Thank you! I hope that going back to work will not deprive us of your most pleasant company. Blessings // paul

Line Gauthier September 18, 2018 at 7:34 PM A beauty, Paul. Thanks for my newest FAVE. Paul Callus September 19, 2018 at 12:21 PM That is very kind of you, Line; both the compliment and fave are appreciated. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit September 18, 2018 at 6:13 PM Very romantic indeed, Paul! The best kind of aftertaste in your depiction. Paul Callus September 19, 2018 at 12:20 PM Thank you, Vijay. Best regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong September 18, 2018 at 5:49 PM I love this romantic scene you have created Paul. I can almost visualize her dress. : ) Paul Callus September 19, 2018 at 12:10 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Connie...ladies go for the dresses...I go for the wine:) Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud September 18, 2018 at 5:43 PM wow, paul...rich flavor of romance is just a few words... lovely!...huggs Paul Callus September 19, 2018 at 12:06 PM Thank you, Nette. You just beat Connie to the comments board:) Hugs // paul