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Fleeting Inspiration

Clad in flowing purple Like a full-bodied Cabernet Sauvignon She vanishes into the Shadows of the night While I stand alone, Dreamily savouring The lingering aftertaste Of her aromatic kiss. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - © September, 2018 Inspired by RS

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/20/2018 3:21:00 PM

Hi Paul, this is such a wonderful, creative write from your pen. The words excite the imagination. The images flow so easily within the mind. Your creativity shines in this excellent write Paul. This is a fave. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/20/2018 4:11:00 PM

Today we've had several pleasant poetic exchanges, my friend:) Thank you for the interest, support and encouragement...and the fav! Enjoy the weekend, Mike. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2018 12:55:00 AM

Hi Paul, A seductive poem and a great write. Regards, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/11/2018 9:35:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer; glad you enjoyed! Regards // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 9/27/2018 12:57:00 PM

Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/27/2018 4:07:00 PM

Thank you, Funom; pleased to see you back in action. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2018 4:56:00 PM

It seems like you enjoyed your favorite ravishing red with the beauty of your passionate pen, my dear friend... I savor the dreamy moments with you, Paul. A nuanced and lovely write with a perfect title as well. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 9/24/2018 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for sharing these dreamy moments with me, Susan...perhaps I ought to open and share with you a bottle of red Cabernet Sauvignon:) Cheers...hugs and warm regards, my friend. // paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/22/2018 9:18:00 PM

Excellent. Well penned...

Paul Callus
Date: 9/23/2018 4:59:00 AM

Thank you, Pashang. Best regards // paul

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/22/2018 1:28:00 AM

Rich and sensuous, Paul, Maltese nights are a fine inspiration. Excellent little write. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2018 6:52:00 AM

Thank you, Viv. Could be hard to sleep in hot Maltese nights, so why not take the opportunity to put pen to paper! Regards // paul

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/21/2018 11:48:00 AM

Awesome write my friend...love & light...^WW^

Paul Callus
Date: 9/21/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, WW. Best regards to you, my friend. // paul

Carole Duet

Date: 9/20/2018 6:32:00 PM

Oh sooo romantic, Paul. Love this. FAVED

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 9/19/2018 10:27:00 PM

What the romantic mind felt when she left? The answer makes the poem more beautiful.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/20/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thank you for commenting, Akham. All feedback is appreciated. Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/19/2018 2:33:00 AM

A lovely romantic image you have created Paul. Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 9/19/2018 1:13:00 PM

Glad you like it, Tom...thank you. Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/19/2018 1:00:00 AM

Unreachable beauty with a "lingering" beautiful work of art! Like waking in the morn with a heart full with the bliss of a wonderful dream! Inspiringly amazing Paul. A joy to read. Best regards. Be blessed always.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/19/2018 12:46:00 PM

Your beautiful comments are always cherished by me, dear Besma! Thank you! I hope that going back to work will not deprive us of your most pleasant company. Blessings // paul