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Fleeing These Halls

In this sweet little pig pen Walls that once were friends And bold shields For lounge room warriors Now barricade Detain indefinitely, denying Beyond them imaginings For ravenous captives With restless longing and fears Choose now the door Indulgence to ruin, or Patience to pride An unforgiving master waits With bitter destinies to navigate Seize propitious offerings Fleeing these halls To uncertain fate Courage now, groomed in isolation Seclusion of rooms No longer resting places.

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Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/19/2013 3:26:00 AM

This is really a deep solely poem, somehow it really captivated my sight and left me in deep impression :) -hug, yanny

Michael Dom
Date: 2/6/2013 11:08:00 PM

Hi Yanny, I'm glad to share that soul-vision with you. I've been away for a while, Cheers & hugs.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/18/2013 2:50:00 PM

Sounds like the college graduate tremors. Always a problem, especially nowadays. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver

Michael Dom
Date: 2/6/2013 11:09:00 PM

hey daver, too true!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2013 9:04:00 PM

Michael, an interesting poem... the image is deep...pd

Michael Dom
Date: 1/12/2013 2:38:00 AM

that means alot coming from you PD. Thank you.

Heather Ober

Date: 1/9/2013 9:18:00 AM

WOW. This is such an interesting write! I love poems like this one - you can interpret it in so many different ways and pick out something new each time you read it. Well done!

Michael Dom
Date: 1/12/2013 2:34:00 AM

thank you Heather. this poem was written during a time when there were lots of changes happening and about to happen in my life.