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Flee To Sanctuary!

Flee the cold,  dark rain
Come, dwell in essence of warmth 
Find peace, love within 
Leave the yesterdays behind
Welcome to sanctuary!

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Gert W. Knop

September 25, 2010 at 7:05 AM

Enjoyed the read of this peaceful Tanka, Audreay! And thank you for commenting Babij Yar. I read the poem by Jewtushenko years ago and somehow I remembered and wrote one too. Have a great Sunday!...Love, Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 24, 2010 at 12:17 PM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by some very exceptional poets today. I am glad yours was one of those I was able to read today Audrey. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM

This makes one feel sheltered and peaceful just reading it, Audrey! Luv, Andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

September 23, 2010 at 8:20 PM

Very nice Tanka, Audrey! Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

John Loving Iii

September 23, 2010 at 3:23 PM

thank you audry for being there. john

Chuck Keys

September 23, 2010 at 2:09 PM

i'm on the way, safe at last. great work, thanks, chuck

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 23, 2010 at 1:32 PM

Nice well expressed thoughts on flee with nice images, Audrey

John Rhinem

September 23, 2010 at 12:21 PM

Smile ~ "WoW, This Is Soooo Beautiful, 'Beyond Beautiful, Lovely, Beautiful, Audrey, Carey!!!'" ~ "Love," John!:) ~

Carolyn Devonshire

September 23, 2010 at 12:01 PM

What a lovely sanctuary you have created here, Audrey. "Love" should be your middle name as you seem to understand its importance more than most, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

September 23, 2010 at 11:50 AM

You seem to be a warm and kind-hearted person, Audrey. I would be grateful to have a friend like you to provide a "sanctuary." Good luck in the contest. Diane

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