Flaws and Gnaws

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Expecting a flood of love letters as scribbling on a sheet of rosewater the fragrance crushed earthy scent a thornless moonlight rose an aesthetic storm is brewing beyond spiritual vitality flows. Breaking down obstacles It's because I don't fit into stereotypes I intend to be myself on this journey I'm not unique but I'm lacking wisdom, Yes, I am a free spirit and a bold mind. Indeed, I am eccentric and disorderly I'm just rusty and dusty I may fall, but I will always rise If you talk easily, I laugh bitterly I wish to be "me," despite my flaws.
Written: January 29, 2023

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Date: 2/2/2023 8:23:00 AM
We have our shortcomings and plus points. Accepting our follies is humility and the efforts to rectify them is divinity. However we have to accept our individuality and develop a self love by being ourselves! Sagacious thoughts, dear friend!
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Date: 1/29/2023 12:35:00 PM
Love those first 4 lines!
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Date: 1/29/2023 11:42:00 AM
Knowing that one does not know is a sign of wisdom. The worst thing is one to think that he knows at the moment he does not. Yes, accepting oneself is the first step toward building a good character! Good work, my friend, Lasaad! Be blessed.
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Date: 1/29/2023 9:43:00 AM
We all have something that is not right. Important to recognise one's faults and correct them.
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