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Flawless Bloom

Upon a tranquil lake she lies in sweet repose a wee sprite turning into a fragrant pink rose Upon waking she saw her mirrored reflection A flawless bloom; petals of chaste perfection Then she saw me and smiled, this fairy child In this enchanted place I was totally beguiled June 8, 2021 Bite Size Poem No.5 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2021 3:51:00 PM

Absolutely charming Jenna this is delightful!, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/12/2021 3:08:00 PM

Your comment is SO very appreciated, Jan.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/10/2021 10:10:00 AM

Totally enchanting Jenna. Lovely imagery! Congratulations on your win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/12/2021 3:08:00 PM

Thank you, Sam.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/10/2021 5:08:00 AM

Wonderful imagination and vision... love this. God bless you and congrats on your top win. Love, Gina

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/10/2021 6:06:00 AM

I appreciate your kind thoughts, Gina.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/9/2021 10:31:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/10/2021 6:05:00 AM

Thank you, Rama.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/9/2021 10:28:00 PM

It's great. Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/10/2021 6:05:00 AM

Thank you kindly.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/9/2021 10:06:00 PM

Beautiful, Jenna:) Congratulations:)

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/10/2021 6:04:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/8/2021 4:22:00 PM

So beautiful Jenna, you’ve such an amazing talent for poetry it’s outstanding. Love this bite size rhyme… Belle

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/8/2021 4:34:00 PM

Awww thank you, Belle. Your thoughts are very encouraging.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/8/2021 6:38:00 AM

Full of taste. Such a gem of a poem. Well done.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/8/2021 7:07:00 AM

Your remarks are very gracious, Victor. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2021 6:32:00 AM

They say lakes are enchanted places, who's to say that fairies don't exist. Many claim to have seen them. A lot of imagery in a few lines, good luck. Hope your week is off to a good start Jenna. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/8/2021 7:06:00 AM

Good day to you, Tom. I'll not be a naysayer when it comes to the wee ones. Thanks for the grand comments, and my week is fine so far. Hope yours is, too.