Flawless Aster Under Auspice Cloud

Flawless Aster under Auspicious Cloud.

I find myself under an Auspicious cloud.
My sweet dreams overcome the flaws in disaster.
Smoothing away all my flaw's in my fear.
I slept under the star shape like an Aster.
Vanishing away the ugliness of my nightmares.
I awaken to a peaceful morning of tranquility.

In a fragrance path leading me to my own Dynasty.
I saw the solution that disabled the flaws of our unity.
Using myself perception of my abilities.
I am overwhelmed by the flawless gloom.
Accepting the careless ways of my responsibilities.
Surrounded by the human bloom.
I am cheerfully flowing out a perfectiveness of a glow.
My flaws have been cleansed and purified.
I joined the flowers of the radiant promising future.
To accomplished life in an auspicious way.

A flawless look into the obvious day.
A beautiful elegance in our harmonious way.
Unmarked in every soul with a purple ray.
Faultless, blameless, no need to beg and pray.
Unhurt like the beauty we find in the sky.
You hold me close with the whole feeling of love.
I am the Auspice in your eye.
Undamaged me with the atmosphere of your Aster wondrous sky.
Unharmed you stand in front of me.
I'm wild like an Aster flower in your hands so perfectly.
Smiles to the world full of flawlessness.
Like a diamond found in nature  untouched and unbroken.
Spoken words clearly come out bless.
A star, two flowers, a cloud, an imaginable token.
Symbolizing the love with no weakness.
Impacted on kindness and daintiness.

Waking up to the the worlds of reality.
I turn around like the moon.
On my taste buds I flavored the blossom smell.
The brightness of a flawless day.
I brush the dust of my shoulders.
I have no anger to castaway.
I've earned no fault when it comes to reason.
Now it's time to comprehend to live in the new.
Forbid my self to dwell on the old.
Look into the beauty that our future world holds.
Close the vision that we only see things for its flaws.
Clear your mind to inner self of mortality.

Longing to see the Aster in the dark sky.
I own the impurity of my air to the Auspicious cloud.
To absolute revive the love of the things that are alive.

By: P.D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/15/2013 10:42:00 PM
Back to your aster poem, it's september's flower!! PD, you were sure going nuts with valentines day, but you made it FUN!!! That's what I love about you. And I see you got a haiku contest going now. I am gonna look something up for you. Thanks for all the contests you are always hosting. I wish I could put so much time into contests as you do. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/5/2012 4:43:00 PM
oh, I do love those asters!!! thanks for your lively comments. So you WANT to tempt people to steal your car by deliberately leaving it running? hahaha. Maybe you want to lose it for insurance purposes. heehee. Hope you have luck with your chat room!!!
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:50:00 PM
Plenty of metaphors here.."My flaws have been cleansed and purified." That would make one perfect world..it would really be interesting to see that happen..but----only in our dreams..lol
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:24:00 AM
Great piece!!! I can relate to this. I used to be the wild upon the world.
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Date: 12/3/2011 8:03:00 AM
a wonderful self searching write..our perspective is really the only thing we have any controll of and we need be carefull to surround ourselfs with faucets not drains! Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:29:00 PM
Well in my perfect world ..... I'd have everyone smile back at meXD,, I say that because I'ts hard to have that now a days,, I smile at all the elder people and they just give me a weird look they probably want to laugh at me lol,, any who, enjoyed your write P.D., =(^.^)=Royal
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Date: 7/13/2010 12:11:00 PM
enjoyed reading this great write and thanks for all your kind comments today!
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:48:00 PM
smells good MA! Love J.C.
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:51:00 AM
Hello to u P.D. my BBF and good day and good week and blessings flowing for u .. good poetry too.. glad u liked my postings today.. am quite happy and content.. leaving for Italy mid August.. and who knows what will happen .. with luv..
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Date: 7/11/2010 8:50:00 PM
by the way, who is this lucky one apart of your nature so romatic in love? ~Always
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Date: 7/11/2010 8:49:00 PM
wow, Sid, now this is quite an intense & beautiful write.(: sounds like nature, just like love should be. how have you been, i just bought the novel 'the short second life of bree tanner'playing jodelle ferland and i read it within two days, so anxious, but i was upset.she&diego died.i didn't really have a favorite couple in twilight, but now that i have heard of diego & bree in this book, i have found my fav couple.lol.im not a twilight fan either, i just like it. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:05:00 PM
PD, Very Nice. So captivating. Thank you for commenting on my writing. Jerri
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:55:00 AM
Wow! Thank you for presenting us with your many insights through this most beautiful poem. Positive thinking and forgiving the past are great ways to stay joyfully alive! (Prayers of thanksgiving to the Creator are in order...etiquette. That is if you believe in God, the creator.) Either way, P.D. you have written an inspiring work and life-philosophy here. Thanks for sharing your beauty. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:25:00 AM
Deep write. We all could learn from nature.
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Date: 7/10/2010 8:28:00 PM
PD. Very elegant writing. gosh, I haven't heard from you in a while. how are you doing, sweet thing? soupmail for ya Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/10/2010 5:50:00 PM
100th view thanks to me ;) do I get a prize or something?? haha, thanks for your comments on my blog-- I replied over there as well-- so how's that write going?? I think I sort of got my muse back though--;) glad you liked that tickled write :) had fun writing it...
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Date: 7/10/2010 5:03:00 PM
good morning pd!! go get some sleep now ;) checked the poem out and all I can say is--ooh lala!! ^_~ & yup I actually have a contest in mind-- will probably post it up later...do let me know if you finished it ok??& where's your blog? go check out mine, I was so enlightened by the responses there ;)--- enjoy the rest of your weekend :)
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Date: 7/10/2010 5:02:00 PM
Nice change in your style..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/10/2010 8:06:00 AM
I had to consult the dictionary on this one, Destroyer. The image seems to be fully contained in the title... A very subtle, soft, sensitive image. Transformed by a flower whose color dominates earth and sky. Great write. Enjoyed mucho. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/10/2010 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment on "Her Fix", boosted confidence tenfold! so very appreciated:)
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:28:00 AM
THE FLoWERY WoRLD WITH No FLAWS. U GoT ME HERE. REAllY A DREAM.-SKAT
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:50:00 AM
going by all these nice comments, Id say your are very liked on here... keep them comming..always Michael
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:56:00 PM
It's our flaws that make us perfect for one another. And it's learning how to live with them that carries us into tomorrow, hopefully. Too much reflection though sometimes gets us lost in a fog of confusion and gloom. I think it could all be wrapped up into a single word....'Acceptance" sometimes a bitter pill to swallow, I know (been there) This is a beautiful expression of that. NICE!
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Date: 7/9/2010 4:29:00 PM
Full of depth and insight P.D. my BFF and very expressive indeed.. intensity in every line my friend.. waking up to the reality of this world is never easy but possible.. enjoyed .. be home tomorrow.. with luv.. BFF ..
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:18:00 PM
Good morning pd ^_^!! I had to check out this sweet poem of yours -- can you say totally sweet and inspiring?? This is really beautiful-- can you ask your Muse where she went? I'll have to ask mine to go there, haha...It's really like a breath of fresh air--wow! So unlike your other writes but still as interesting and enjoyable--this made me smile for different reasons- I love the images that popped in my head for this one-- just a typo for flaws in line3; off L5S4-- enjoy your day! nikko :)
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