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Flavors of Love

Love is like a Lollipop you don't know what's inside until you taste it and describe If it's Cherry, you won't have to worry because he's always merry and very imaginary If it's Chocolate, your ready for wedlock because you've finally meet your Camelot If it's Cinnamon, he's hot and ready for a short stop because for you he has forgot If it's Grape, put on your brakes he might be great but he isn't straight If it's Strawberry, you've won the lottery you'll have his property and he won't commit adultery If it's peppermint, you'll have a saint his charm will make you faint and you'll never have complaints If it's Caramel, you'll have a professional who's always rational and very inspirational If it's Licorice, you'll have a plagiarist who's always gibberish and thank he's a theorist If it's Sour, ladies beware he's always in despair and will always need repairs So don't be shy have a taste and give it a try you might be pleasantly Surprised! 3/7/2015 1st Place

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Date: 4/7/2016 8:42:00 AM
real good Tammy, like you describe each aspect of love, truly inspiring indeed.
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Date: 3/12/2015 2:31:00 AM
Wow so many colours well defined Tammy! love ur take on the theme dear! Big congrats on top place win!
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Date: 3/12/2015 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma on your nice comment. It was a fun write.
Date: 3/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
love your take on the theme! many congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Jan. It was a fun write and I still have people wanting me to add other flavors. Thank you again
Date: 3/11/2015 12:22:00 AM
Very unique and fun to read, grats on your win!
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Date: 3/11/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Casarah for you nice comment.
Date: 3/10/2015 8:45:00 PM
how novel Tammy great take on theme congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 3/11/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thank you Shadow for the nice comment. Hugs back to you.
Date: 3/10/2015 5:45:00 PM
Tammy, a fun poem to read, I think I want my guy to be a "peppermint" I like the charming and no complaints part, well done, and thanks so much for my wonderful placement in your The Pain Of Night Contest, I am very honoured . . .
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Date: 3/11/2015 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings for the nice comment. I agree peppermint is good but if you want to retire strawberry is for me! I will be doing another contest later this week and I hope you enter.
Date: 3/10/2015 10:31:00 AM
If its vanilla Tammy?
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Date: 3/12/2015 9:11:00 AM
Oh no plain vanilla. Love Tammy.
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Date: 3/10/2015 5:13:00 PM
If it's Vanilla, you'll have someone who is jealous but you'll thank he's quite precious until he starts to yelling. (Sorry about that but it rhymes well.)
Date: 3/8/2015 3:56:00 PM
hahaha, about grape. that was funny. Dang, I really like licorice flavor. you made that one a bad one! I think to even this one out and show the true ration of bad men to good, you need to add in a few more negative flavors. haha. I love candy so I enjoyed this poem!!
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Date: 3/8/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! I had a whole list of flavors but I was afraid I would run out of the ALLOWED CHARACTERS. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. As for the licorice maybe a muzzle would work. Again Thank You!
Date: 3/8/2015 3:55:00 PM
hey, what was your fire and ice business all about? Now let me check out this poem.
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Date: 3/8/2015 5:08:00 PM
AC and Heating business
Date: 3/8/2015 4:11:00 AM
" Love is like a Lollipop you don't know what's inside until you taste it and describe" So true and interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Ravi. Wrote this for fun. Now we need one for the men to give to the ladies.

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