Flavors of Love

Love is like a Lollipop 
        you don't know what's inside until you taste it and describe

If it's Cherry,       you won't have to worry because he's always merry
                          and very imaginary
If it's Chocolate,   your ready for wedlock
                           because you've finally meet your Camelot
If it's Cinnamon,   he's hot and ready for a short stop
                           because for you he has forgot
If it's Grape,         put on your brakes he might be great
                           but he isn't straight
If it's Strawberry,  you've won the lottery you'll have his property
                           and he won't commit adultery
If it's peppermint, you'll have a saint his charm will make you faint
                           and you'll never have complaints
If it's Caramel,      you'll have a professional who's always rational
                           and very inspirational
If it's Licorice,       you'll have a plagiarist who's always gibberish
                           and thank he's a theorist
If it's Sour,           ladies beware he's always in despair
                           and will always need repairs
                So don't be shy have a taste and give it a try
                you might be pleasantly Surprised!
3/7/2015
                                          1st Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcconnell Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:42 AM
real good Tammy, like you describe each aspect of love, truly inspiring indeed.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:31 AM
Wow so many colours well defined Tammy! love ur take on the theme dear! Big congrats on top place win!
Reams Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma on your nice comment. It was a fun write.
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 8:14 AM
love your take on the theme! many congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx
Reams Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Thank you Jan. It was a fun write and I still have people wanting me to add other flavors. Thank you again
Nance Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Very unique and fun to read, grats on your win!
Reams Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Thank you Casarah for you nice comment.
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 8:45 PM
how novel Tammy great take on theme congrats on 1st place hugs
Reams Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Thank you Shadow for the nice comment. Hugs back to you.
La France Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Tammy, a fun poem to read, I think I want my guy to be a "peppermint" I like the charming and no complaints part, well done, and thanks so much for my wonderful placement in your The Pain Of Night Contest, I am very honoured . . .
Reams Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Broken Wings for the nice comment. I agree peppermint is good but if you want to retire strawberry is for me! I will be doing another contest later this week and I hope you enter.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 10:31 AM
If its vanilla Tammy?
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Oh no plain vanilla. Love Tammy.
Reams Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 5:13 PM
If it's Vanilla, you'll have someone who is jealous but you'll thank he's quite precious until he starts to yelling. (Sorry about that but it rhymes well.)
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 3:56 PM
hahaha, about grape. that was funny. Dang, I really like licorice flavor. you made that one a bad one! I think to even this one out and show the true ration of bad men to good, you need to add in a few more negative flavors. haha. I love candy so I enjoyed this poem!!
Reams Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Andrea! I had a whole list of flavors but I was afraid I would run out of the ALLOWED CHARACTERS. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. As for the licorice maybe a muzzle would work. Again Thank You!
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 3:55 PM
hey, what was your fire and ice business all about? Now let me check out this poem.
Reams Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:08 PM
AC and Heating business
Sathasivam Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:11 AM
" Love is like a Lollipop you don't know what's inside until you taste it and describe" So true and interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Reams Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Ravi. Wrote this for fun. Now we need one for the men to give to the ladies.
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