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Flatline

stripped naked
embraced in wonder
as moonlight enhances sweat 
on the manly chest of enticement
though tender are his feelings
he is abandoned 
to silence 
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"Give me a Sign"-nette onclaud contest
Judy Konos 5/15/15

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Kim Merryman Date: 6/7/2015 6:39:00 PM Wow! Powerful imagery, Judy! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/7/2015 6:46:00 PM Thank you...appreciate it..

Skat A Date: 6/6/2015 11:23:00 PM Judy, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT** Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/7/2015 6:47:00 PM Thank you Boot Skat and Boogie...

Thabang Ngoma Date: 6/6/2015 4:04:00 PM Hi Judy...thank u for the breath-taking imagery n congrats on ur win...rgds, 7habang Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 6:24:00 PM well thank you for your comment....appreciate it

John Lawless Date: 6/6/2015 3:22:00 PM Judy, I missed this on my daily readings and must say this is a wonderfully divergent take on the theme. It left me sitting, silent, to reflect on its depth. Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 6:25:00 PM Thank you John...I got the feeling he did her in! ouch.... Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 6:25:00 PM OOPS old age caught me....I got the wrong poem....LOL..thanks for your comment

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/6/2015 1:19:00 PM I really liked how you did yours. I remember this one for it is a striking entry in her contest. Congrats for a well deserved win, Judy. Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 6:26:00 PM Thank you ....

Jan Allison Date: 6/6/2015 10:17:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Judy:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 6:27:00 PM Thank You

Sandra Haight Date: 6/6/2015 9:51:00 AM Wow, sad, but so powerful for the theme, Judy. Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 6:27:00 PM Thank you Sandra

Paul Callus Date: 6/6/2015 9:41:00 AM Congratulations on this much deserved win, Judy. Your clever muse led you out of the box...and you were wise to follow! // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 6/7/2015 9:17:00 AM :) Both our entries finished in 'silence'!! Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 8:50:00 PM Thank you Paul I'll be glad when my muse catches half way up with yours!

Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2015 1:44:00 PM What a unique take on the theme Judy - stark sad imagery:-( good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 8:51:00 PM Thank you Jan

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/18/2015 12:18:00 AM oh my, this one seems so sad, Judy. I think you did a good job of making one that is different. Very original and quite an image. Soupmail. Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 8:51:00 PM Thank you Andrea