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Flat Tire

In my urban habitat, On a bridge’s ramp, Heard a noise like rat-a-tat, Giving me a cramp. Taxi driver passed my way, Pointing to my wheel; Couldn’t hear, with traffic’s fray, What miles would soon reveal. Soon I felt familiar thumps – Oh no! My tire is flat! Riding over highway bumps Tempts rubber to go splat. Slowly rolled to a garage Where they made a switch. Gratitude in me loomed large, But isn’t life a *****? Just in case we think it’s not, There’s plenty to remind us That even days that hit the spot Hide havoc, which will find us. Could have been a whole lot worse If fate did so conspire; Still, my day became adverse When I blew out my tire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/23/2013 8:09:00 PM
You can make a gem of a poem out of anything. That is a real gift. Love this poem.
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:31:00 PM
Whether it be a flat tire or some other rift. Staying calm is half the battle, if you get my drift. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:26:00 AM
Well done Ilene. I have been there a few times before. That being said, I would like to dispense some advice to women. Make sure you have a jack compatible to your car. Invest in a 4 way lug wrench. You can find one at Home Depot or Lowes or any auto parts store. It will ensure that you will always have the right size for any car and help apply the torque needed to get the job done. The better thing to do is make sure you have roadside assistance on your insurance. That's what I do for my wife.
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:24:00 AM
Well written! Just the thought of having a flat when on the road is enough to make one cringe. I like how you've brought it out and intertwined it with life - very nice.
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:34:00 PM
ilene , three times this has happened to me ON THE FREEWAY, not to mention a few other times in town. I still don't even know how to change a tire and I can't depend on my female wiles forever. hahaha. How I hate blowouts. This is a great poem.
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Date: 11/12/2013 2:04:00 PM
- I've never experienced that in all the years I've driven a car ..... - Thankfully!! - Boring when it happens ....yes::: ***** !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:47:00 AM
I don't have a car anymore since I live in the city. I remember having flat tires and once drove across a bridge with just a rim on! Enjoyable work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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