Flashing lights

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 A weary traveler seeks to find
 a place to lay his head
 A distant light, the neon kind
 Flashes in the red

 He heads towards the light
 There to find a place to sleep
 It's a motel, he spends the night
 Hoping dreams will take him deep

 When morning comes he'll grab a bite
 and hit the open road
 But when morning came he's not in sight
 A mystery to decode

 He'd fallen victim to a femme fatale
 Who had seduced him in the night
 She was driving his car now, what a gal
 Speeding down the road in the sunlight

 But in the rearview mirror were flashing lights
 The cops were on her tail
 She pulls over, shows her pearly whites
 But now she's going to jail!

 Fiction
 10-18-2024

Many thanks to Maria for turning these lyrics into a song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 10/30/2024 1:45:00 AM
great poem turned into son by Maria, and deserved ending this gal, a femme fatale, who seduced this traveler during the night and took off with his car. Congratulations to both you and Maria. Blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 10/23/2024 12:36:00 PM
This was SO cute. Wow, Maria is very talented making your work of fiction into a marvelous song. Great job on both of you.
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Date: 10/23/2024 8:45:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I enjoyed reading, and listening to your flashing lights poem and song. Nicely put together.
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Date: 10/22/2024 5:37:00 PM
Nice lyrics. Maria is soooo generous with her time. She's a true gem
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Joseph May
Date: 10/23/2024 7:12:00 AM
She is very generous with her time, and yes, she is indeed a gem
Date: 10/19/2024 10:44:00 PM
A great well rhymed story/poem Joseph. It reminds me of the song 'Summer Wine' UB40 - Bono and the Cors. Your lyrics could make an excellent song. Hugs Maria
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Joseph May
Date: 10/23/2024 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria, I appreciate you making a song for me, Hugs
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Maria Williams
Date: 10/22/2024 5:33:00 PM
Hi Joe, I knew it would work - Thank you for mentioning me in your attribution. It was a pleasure putting music and voice to your Lyrics. Hugs Maria
Date: 10/19/2024 11:57:00 AM
Dear Joseph, what an engaging write, i love this rhyme and how youv told us the story, the ending wasnt at all what I expected but was clever and creative of you, brilliant storytelling skills here portrayed. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always.
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Date: 10/19/2024 3:53:00 AM
The law will always catch up with the wrongdoers in the end. Tom
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Date: 10/19/2024 3:52:00 AM
She got what she deserved lol.. Great rhyme and flow to your poem..
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Date: 10/19/2024 3:19:00 AM
Careful dear traveller. Getting in jail is no fun. :) Cute fun.
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Date: 10/18/2024 4:57:00 PM
Did he bail her out? Ha ha. This is a lovely bad boy poem.
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