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New love – white hot and ravenous, gasping air as reason struggles. Oh – ardor of flambé; sweet still, in flame’s repose. Though a dance once tangoed - waltzes …just a caress, old embers spark. 25 May 2020 HEXASTICH IT Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 5/31/2020 7:54:00 AM
Captivating romantic verse full of passion and ardor dear, David! Blessings
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:46:00 PM
Romantic lines with an ardent passionate flavour, David. Exquisite! Congratulations on placing first. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/30/2020 12:18:00 PM
a passionate piece David, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/30/2020 11:07:00 AM
A tale of blazing love through metaphors. Brilliant. Congratulations on your win David :)
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Date: 5/30/2020 10:53:00 AM
so many interpretations for this sizzling poem with vibrant imagery... cheers to you for placing 1st in my contest,david...huggs
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Date: 5/30/2020 6:54:00 AM
Wow. This is amazing and I truly love it. Congrats on your winning placement. Much love and blessings sent your way, Gina
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Date: 5/29/2020 11:12:00 PM
just a caress, old embers spark..Beautifully penned..Great win David..Congrats..
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