David Mohn Poet Verse

Flash Fire

New love – white hot and ravenous,
     gasping air as reason struggles.
           Oh – ardor of flambé; 
       sweet still, in flame’s repose.
Though a dance once tangoed - waltzes 
    …just a caress, old embers spark.

	
                   25 May 2020
       HEXASTICH IT Poetry Contest
       Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Demetrios Trifiatis May 31, 2020 at 7:54 AM Captivating romantic verse full of passion and ardor dear, David! Blessings

Paul Callus May 30, 2020 at 3:46 PM Romantic lines with an ardent passionate flavour, David. Exquisite! Congratulations on placing first. ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison May 30, 2020 at 12:18 PM a passionate piece David, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra May 30, 2020 at 11:07 AM A tale of blazing love through metaphors. Brilliant. Congratulations on your win David :)

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2020 at 10:53 AM so many interpretations for this sizzling poem with vibrant imagery... cheers to you for placing 1st in my contest,david...huggs

Regina Mcintosh May 30, 2020 at 6:54 AM Wow. This is amazing and I truly love it. Congrats on your winning placement. Much love and blessings sent your way, Gina

Jenish Somadas May 29, 2020 at 11:12 PM just a caress, old embers spark..Beautifully penned..Great win David..Congrats..