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Flammable Soul

Raging fires roared, yet nothing could hold her back; she was born in flames... Sadly, that which helps forge vitality, indubitably, burns. Embers soon seek refuge in blanketed debris, praying to fade as apathy attempts to nurture injury. Mercy, I beg, draw near and peel back ashen veil; enable compassion, tenderness, and understanding to elicit tears of gratitude, for they are certain to ignite abandoned flames! Let passion's fire forever radiate deeply within this and every soul. May all come to know her warmth, be guided by her light, feel her rapture in righteous endeavors, and nevermore become singed nor devoured by her eternal blaze. PEACE, LOVE & JOY TO ALL 2020

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/15/2023 12:12:00 PM

Hey! This is beautiful. Really liked it!

Hello There
Date: 2/17/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paige : )

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/17/2023 7:09:00 PM

I like your metaphors. I use them as well.

Hello There
Date: 2/17/2023 11:45:00 AM

Thank you, Debbie : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/8/2020 8:58:00 PM

powerful verse my friend....great metaphor in this one...it lingers ...hugs

Hello There
Date: 1/9/2020 2:52:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra ~ Was shooting for that threesome form challenge, but wound up with this when I couldn't quite manage it ;) I wasn't sure about it, so I really appreciate your feedback :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/8/2020 7:18:00 AM

WOW! So many potent verses of wisdom my friend:...Sadly, that which helps forge vitality, indubitably, burns..and...praying to fade as apathy attempts to nurture injury. A heartfelt prayer: peace, love, and joy to you, HT. A FAVE for me.

Hello There
Date: 1/8/2020 10:58:00 AM

Whew...Thank you so much, Vijay. Your feedback and fave leave me feeling elated ~ Thank you so very much, my friend <3

Chris Green

Date: 1/8/2020 6:57:00 AM

And a beautifully written poetic prayer it is. Love your dedication but this could speak to many who feel that the flames of life may be getting a little close and are in need of some healing. Your poem is wonderful, I like how you expressed your thoughts in this.

Hello There
Date: 1/8/2020 12:07:00 PM

Yes, I do believe!

Chris Green
Date: 1/8/2020 11:53:00 AM

I was extremely concerned and it left me wondering do three footnotes equal a yardnote?

Hello There
Date: 1/8/2020 11:10:00 AM

As a footnote to my previous note regarding changes to the original footnote, I would like to note that the footnote was not needed so I edited it out. In case you were wondering ;)

Hello There
Date: 1/8/2020 10:53:00 AM

Thank you so much, Chris ~ The prayer is for all, and though the rest is personal, I feel better knowing others may relate. I changed some of the wording in the footnote for this was not meant to be a dedication. I really appreciate you and your feedback always <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2020 12:59:00 AM

Hello There, beautifully poem.

Hello There
Date: 1/8/2020 1:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line <3