Flamingo

Stunning apparition in flamboyant fluffy dress
How gracefully you ripple the lagoon.
The palm trees sway in unison
With your blushing pink flirtatious dance. 
Virtuoso of balance, standing on guard,
Your serpentine neck poised with pride,
I am transfixed by your beauty
As sunset lingers on the horizon.


07.10.20


In Praise Of The Ode Poetry Contest -sponsored by Nette Onclaud
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Date: 10/19/2020 8:24:00 PM
Beautiful writing of a breattakingly unique bird, Wendy. It starts so perfectly with 'stunning apparition' and keeps getting better. I loved 'virtuoso of balance'. Well done, and congrats on your win (even the Captcha says 'YAY'!) ~ John
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/21/2021 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. Sadly I don't suppose I'll ever see one in its natural setting but three cheers for the powers of the imagination!
Date: 10/16/2020 6:59:00 PM
So far the flamingo poems are all really shining with imagery. Well deserved win Wendy. Congrats
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/21/2021 2:48:00 PM
Thanks for the appreciation, Andrea.
Date: 10/16/2020 12:24:00 PM
A lovely ode capturing all of the grace of these amazing ballet dancers in nature's dance. Congratulations on your elegant write!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/21/2021 2:48:00 PM
What a lovely comment! thank you, Sam.
Date: 10/16/2020 5:55:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Wendy. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/21/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you,Linda. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 10/7/2020 4:04:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Wendy :) - A beautiful dance in the pretty dress :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/7/2020 4:26:00 AM
I greatly appreciate your encouraging comment,Anne-Lise.
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