Flamingo

Stunning apparition in flamboyant fluffy dress
How gracefully you ripple the lagoon.
The palm trees sway in unison
With your blushing pink flirtatious dance. 
Virtuoso of balance, standing on guard,
Your serpentine neck poised with pride,
I am transfixed by your beauty
As sunset lingers on the horizon.


07.10.20


In Praise Of The Ode Poetry Contest -sponsored by Nette Onclaud
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Watt Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 8:24 PM
Beautiful writing of a breattakingly unique bird, Wendy. It starts so perfectly with 'stunning apparition' and keeps getting better. I loved 'virtuoso of balance'. Well done, and congrats on your win (even the Captcha says 'YAY'!) ~ John
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:49 PM
Thank you so much, John. Sadly I don't suppose I'll ever see one in its natural setting but three cheers for the powers of the imagination!
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 6:59 PM
So far the flamingo poems are all really shining with imagery. Well deserved win Wendy. Congrats
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:48 PM
Thanks for the appreciation, Andrea.
Kauffman Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:24 PM
A lovely ode capturing all of the grace of these amazing ballet dancers in nature's dance. Congratulations on your elegant write!
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:48 PM
What a lovely comment! thank you, Sam.
Fowler Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 5:55 AM
Beautiful imagery Wendy. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Thank you,Linda. I appreciate your feedback.
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:04 AM
- A beautiful poem, Wendy :) - A beautiful dance in the pretty dress :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watson Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:26 AM
I greatly appreciate your encouraging comment,Anne-Lise.
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