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Flames of Fortitude

P e a c e is a language spoken between healing bougainvilleas and bleeding begonias, dripping dews of hope through simple gestures~ like specks of sapphire dust from stars sparkling amidst bed-shaped clouds, crawling through the horizon many miles away, stretching beyond the fogginess that veils clarity, stirring the anchored odyssey to sail through twisted tides of turquoise, facing the harshness of reality like a mistress of sky and sea~ u n b r e a k a b l e, cloaked in opalescent shimmers… Tonight, I feel the warmth of inner light rushing through arteries swollen with angst, for I am the dream I’ve been chasing~ through the greyest of rays, oblivious to the bluest blur within violet haze, lost in the coldness of wicked waves whistling woeful verses to the sun that rests in the arms of the marine nest. Let me be the serenity you inhale when your heart feels like a secluded vessel. Let me be the solace to midnight melancholy, when darkness is the comfort of a duvet where nightingales croon. Let me float like the softness of feathers as I wish upon unseen jewels of twilight, for I will rise and soar like a phoenix, reborn in flames of fortitude, allowing pain to be the prompt when ink suffocates in a casket of deceased dahlias embalmed with dulcet desires..... I am the aura of a waltzing wildflower, rooted in the soul of your garden blooming with graceful gladiolus still soaked in the scent of sun-kissed sands homing everlasting evergreens... and you will f o r e v e r be my 3 a.m. prose~ the peace I embrace in your absence, when sleep is a mere forgotten rhyme...

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Date: 2/6/2025 8:31:00 PM
If anything, your work is surely romantic. So loved the end
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Date: 2/1/2025 11:52:00 PM
Hello Ink, beautifully written and an enjoyable read. Loved it. Wishing you a great day, my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:11:00 PM
Awn thank you so much for your kind comment . Appreciate your visits always
Date: 2/1/2025 9:11:00 AM
When sleep is a mere forgotten rhyme.... And you'll forever be my 3am prose. Ah! Ink. I know that's your favourite time of the morning to write. Magnificent. I'll read this to a lover. Well written. "Let me be the serenity you inhale when your heart feels like a secluded vessel." Such assuring line. "for I am the dream I’ve been chasing~" Yes! Yes! You are.
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:14:00 PM
My dear sweet tonye, im so happy to see you back and you took time to read and leave your thoughts on so many of my poems! You truly are a special one! Thank you so very much for your kindness and sincere support! Im always grateful to have you here
Date: 2/1/2025 8:38:00 AM
IE, this poem reverberates on different levels. The inner workings of our minds at night when dreams come and go. What we search for in creation surely approaches perfection of some kind in our minds...but to put it on paper is not always easy when it is a product of that which sometimes eludes us. Memory is a very complex thing. When I read the lines that start with "Let me be..." I don't really know if you are talking to the dream part of your mind or to me as a reader. I have to process this both ways and see how it affects the result of reading. Language and ambiguity are wonderful things! Smiles!!
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:16:00 PM
That was exactly my intention too , youve mentioned here in comments, so grateful as always for your kind and generous support, truly! Thank you for always reading and leaving such sincere comments
Date: 1/31/2025 10:38:00 PM
Truly beautiful and a favorite for me...
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:16:00 PM
Dear poetic soul, thank you so much for the favorite and also for your visit im truly grateful for your kind support
Date: 1/31/2025 8:06:00 PM
Peace so profound and multifaceted which transcends mere absence of conflict,gentle and having transformative energy......very nicely penned.
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind and generous support truly
Date: 1/31/2025 6:44:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your beautiful, haunting verse, Ink. Thank you for sharing this stirring poem, and delighted congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear evelyn! Always grateful for your kind support
Date: 1/31/2025 5:55:00 PM
Ink this is such a great write. Resilience and coping through difficult situations within oneself. Congratulations on your 1st place title. Blessings Dear Ink...
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear michael i appreciate always your kind support
Date: 1/31/2025 3:28:00 PM
Gorgeous one, Ink. Do you were up in the wee hours writing this one? Sometimes that is the best way to write. I always like so much the way you finish off your poems with such a flourish
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:27:00 PM
Awn thank you sweet andrea, i need to mail you soon. I appreciate your comment as always
Date: 1/31/2025 12:55:00 PM
ending is so touching, and all emotions before, the brilliant imagery, sounds are perfect, and reading delicious till the end, enjoyed yann
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:30:00 PM
Awn thank you poetic soul, appreciate your kindness always
Date: 1/31/2025 10:18:00 AM
There is strength,healing and peace in this poem. As to be expected this is a poem with vivid imagery great use of language and wonderful alliteration. You use beauty description of nature. Wonderful to read.
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Date: 2/2/2025 11:43:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear victor for always being so supportive
Date: 1/31/2025 9:46:00 AM
"lost in the coldness of wicked waves whistling woeful verses to the sun that rests in the arms of the marine nest" ~ my favourite lines, Ink:) brilliant writing as always:) congratulations:)
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Date: 2/2/2025 11:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind and generous support, always grateful
Date: 1/31/2025 8:08:00 AM
"facing the harshness of reality like a mistress of sky and sea~ u n b r e a k a b l e, cloaked in opalescent shimmers…" -- indeed, sometimes best choice is to go with the flow..."I am the dream I’ve been chasing~ " -- Profound indeed. "Let me be the serenity you inhale" -- absolutely, the gem of receiving comes by route of The Art of Selflessly Giving.
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Date: 2/3/2025 12:12:00 AM
Thank you always for being so kind and generous with your support. Appreciate always your poetic presence
Date: 1/31/2025 8:03:00 AM
Dearest Ink, You have written a superb poem on the subject of healing, resilience, and peace in the face of inner turbulence. It involves the process of self-discovery and striving to provide solace and hope to a loved one. Included in the theme are depictions of nature, analysis of one's own life, and the stark contrast between one's inner turmoil and the natural wonders around them. The language is quite descriptive and evocative, appealing to the senses. Words such as "healing," "bleeding," "dripping dews of hope," and "opalescent shimmers" build a picture of profound emotion and beauty. Best wishes and hugs
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Date: 2/3/2025 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much dr sotto, im always grateful for your kind support. Sending you light always
Date: 1/31/2025 6:13:00 AM
specks of sapphire dust from stars sparkling amidst bed-shaped clouds, mmmm u have this way with words papi!!! stirring the anchored odyssey to sail through twisted tides of turquoise,Can get sooo lost in the beauty of ur weaves!!! warmth of inner light rushing through arteries swollen with angst, oh damn the imagary !!! Let me be the serenity you inhale… oooo papi!!! Yessss that’s some sexaaaay stuffff!!! darkness is the comfort of a duvet. Ooo love that!! pain to be the prompt., ink suffocates in a casket of deceased dahlias.. mmm the kind of grace n heaviness you bring in a piece is absolutely addictive papi!! waltzing wildflower, garden blooming with graceful gladiolus still soaked in the scent of sun-kissed sands… mmmm yesss come thru alliterations!!! Absolutely stunning papiiii
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Date: 1/31/2025 4:56:00 AM
You are a bright poetic star sweet ink….lovely poem! Debx
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Date: 1/31/2025 5:01:00 AM
And you are such a sweet soul sweet debx, i appreciate your visits always, thank you so very much
Date: 1/31/2025 4:43:00 AM
The aura … love it …
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Date: 1/31/2025 5:01:00 AM
Thank you always dahlin

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