Viv Wigley Poet Rhyme

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(inspired by Casarah Nance)

Remember-
When a burning passion runs amok
and leaves you smouldering in the rubble
that a heart's made from the shape of two teardrops
and therein lies the trouble.

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Lindsay Laurie March 25, 2015 at 1:18 AM G'day Viv... very wise words indeed Viv. I guess some of us live and learn on the words of your poem. Thanks mate - Lindsay Viv Wigley March 25, 2015 at 3:32 AM Cheers, Laurie. Viv

Anthony Beesley March 20, 2015 at 8:40 PM Short and sweet and savagely to the point Viv Wigley March 25, 2015 at 3:32 AM Thanks for popping by, Anthony. Regards, Viv

Eileen Manassian March 19, 2015 at 7:38 AM Superb. I really loved this write of yours. It touched me. Thanks for your visits to my work. Much appreciated. Viv Wigley March 19, 2015 at 8:43 PM Thanks, Jade, and keep on smiling and doing what you do x

Njeri Hunjeri March 19, 2015 at 2:02 AM Wow, def a 7. My favorite line "that a heart's made from the shape of two teardrops and therein lies the trouble." Viv Wigley March 19, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thanks, njeri. Viv x