Flame

Flame

My unrequited love of thee
was not returned in words or touch
and it had reached a torrid toll
that sparked a flame within my soul
its strength ignited by my pain
send to me a thunderous rain
to extinguish this flame of love
leave a smoldering memory
of a love that can never be

Ralph Sergi  Flame  June 12, 2014
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Sergi Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Hi Anne Lise: Thank you for your comment
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June 13, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Hi Barbara: Thank you for your kind comment.
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June 12, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Such a sad poem..but so nicely written ..made my throat ache. BG
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June 12, 2014 at 2:39 PM
- Unattainable love ........ a touching and well written poem Ralph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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