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'flaky Memories'

flaky memories 
selective priority
tie up his spirit 
while drifting further away
snuff out his love with distance

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James Fraser

November 19, 2014 at 3:50 PM

Memories sure do become flaky, fine poetry Wilma, James :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 5, 2014 at 8:49 AM

flaky memories are a problem. They are freaky. It's tough to gather the fragments again. I have enjoyed your poem. Love Wilma...rajat

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 4, 2014 at 12:57 PM

Loving this Tanka of yours...and beautiful avatar!! Hugs :)

Dave Timperley

June 2, 2014 at 3:56 AM

Flaky Memories, well, that's me alright. Love this write. God Bless. D.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 30, 2014 at 11:41 AM

Missy--you looking Gorgeous on your avatar! Woot-wuw-- ok I do not know how to whistle, even in print. Really like this tanka of yours... shuckers... now you got me wondering again! Me and my runaway imagination, got this all drawn out in my weird head. But yes, sometimes maybe distance can do good. So hard, but it can do good in its own time. Loving the conviction in the last line, if only it were that easy to do though! Mwahugs and so great to see you writing again! Me? Hmm, all in my head, my fuzzy fuzzy head.