Flakes

The pure white of some stars
Today are falling down the earth
They are hiding on the groung
They are melting on my palm. 

Its raining with wishes today
I said
With new ideas, new us
A lot of dreams are ready this day
To be fulfilled, nothing to say!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Wonderful!
Moise Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Thank youuu your such a cute and wonderful person <3
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