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Flake

You say you’re not usually a flake But you like bud so u can bake... Doesn’t like pie prefers cake After a "bowl" with ice cream u will take Out to dinner we both had steak You get down like shake n bake... I thought the evening was great Until you made your great escape Coming back w/ flowers to overtake Putting my mind in quiet a state... The night’s events you did partake Or were you just being fake? Several hrs like an earthquake Getting up I had to steady my gait... Watching you sleep I did a double take Because my mind u did sedate Your actions telling me u a snake Even though you did not abate... Or are you a dog from a crate? Something you need to set straight Are u trying to make my heart ache? That's ok I'll eat loads of cupcakes... While consuming alcohol intake Oh no, my head not feeling so great Laughing hysterically while eating cheesecake Wondering what the heck is wapentake... Feeling ready to dictate Hate wine but wanna eat some grapes Asking to meet me at your place So the store at no later than eight... If you can't handle this date Then lose my number you flake

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Date: 11/1/2012 11:31:00 AM
Becca, welcome to P-Soup - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:14:00 AM
Vsry interesting. I know that you can do better than this guy.
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