Flake

You say you’re not usually a flake
But you like bud so u can bake...
Doesn’t like pie prefers cake
After a "bowl" with ice cream u will take

Out to dinner we both had steak
You get down like shake n bake...
I thought the evening was great
Until you made your great escape

Coming back w/ flowers to overtake
Putting my mind in quiet a state...
The night’s events you did partake
Or were you just being fake?

Several hrs like an earthquake
Getting up I had to steady my gait...
Watching you sleep I did a double take
Because my mind u did sedate 

Your actions telling me u a snake
Even though you did not abate...
Or are you a dog from a crate?
Something you need to set straight

Are u trying to make my heart ache?
That's ok I'll eat loads of cupcakes...
While consuming alcohol intake
Oh no, my head not feeling so great

Laughing hysterically while eating cheesecake
Wondering what the heck is wapentake...
Feeling ready to dictate
Hate wine but wanna eat some grapes

Asking to meet me at your place
So the store at no later than eight...
If you can't handle this date
Then lose my number you flake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/1/2012 11:31:00 AM
Becca, welcome to P-Soup - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:14:00 AM
Vsry interesting. I know that you can do better than this guy.
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