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Flag Maker Betsy Ross

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Flag Maker Betsy Ross

It is said the first flag maker was Ms. Betsy Ross
Was also said she could do well with some dental floss
As one can imagine twas because she ran out of thread
She forgot to order it because she didn't take her meds

Battle Of The Clerihew---Contest Of P.D.
Written By: Carol Brown
6th Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/29/2012 3:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carol! Funny write. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:20:00 AM
congrats Carol on an awesome win .. so liked this piece when first read.. nice idea to do one on Betsy Ross luv..
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:08:00 PM
I really liked yours, CArol and am glad to see it here on the winners' list. Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:43:00 AM
Carol congrats on your win, David
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:14:00 AM
Thank you P.D. for the placement and to everyone for your comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:03:00 AM
CAROL, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/26/2012 9:10:00 AM
haha.. what a great Clerihew Carol.. so glad we all joined in the fun on PS.. thankxx so very much for my win and placemenmt.. PS is a super special place for us all.. and poets like u make it ultra special my friend.. luv..
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Date: 1/26/2012 6:15:00 AM
So SHE WAS THE ONE WHO INVENTED DENTAL FLOSS! Oh, I get it!! Great idea, Carols. I bet Bob was slapping his leg over this one..the more insight into the person's soul, the better the clerihew. Great job here. Love, GWendolen
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:06:00 PM
funny!! enoyed reading your work today!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 3:41:00 PM
Cousin to the Barbara Frietche? who hung the stars n stripes, Rebel host weren't glad to meet her, an officer stopped their gripe... who touches a hair....
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Date: 1/19/2012 12:58:00 PM
This one is funny Carol. Hope Betsy don't mind. God Blesss, JB
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:53:00 AM
Let's see Meds, Flags, Dental Floss (Funny) What kind of med was it? I guess she could have done it faster with a med... Now the teeth had the thread in them because she used them for sissors... I get it... Good show!
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:52:00 AM
Carol -- I am laughing so hard. You make my day. love, Kathy P.S. What's a clerihew? Whatever it is, this is a good one.
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:18:00 AM
Still I don't know about Ms. Betsy Ross, but it's sure if a patient does not take medicine in time, he or she forgets and run out of thread. Lovely penned my friend, Thanks for your wishes, bl
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Date: 1/19/2012 9:17:00 AM
witty write ...the way it is penned makes it a little more attractive, luv, jag
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:08:00 AM
This is skillfully penned,Carol.Thank you for congrats.
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Date: 1/19/2012 6:49:00 AM
Nice poem, its very aethetic
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Date: 1/18/2012 10:04:00 PM
haha, Those first two lines were a really cute image. Betsy with floss not yet invented! Glad to see you doing the clerihew battle, CArol. COOL
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:21:00 PM
Carol, you just made me smile... imagine dental floss at hand... you are way to xool...always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:06:00 PM
LOL, I love this witty piece, Carol.
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Date: 1/18/2012 11:53:00 AM
Haha! Don't you hate it when that (forgetting to take your meds) happens;) Enjoyed your poem! D
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