Flabulous

When someone says, “You look flabulous”!
Is it just a slip of the tongue
Or are they trying to let you know
You're not trim like when you were young!

Words can be cruel and hurtful at times
Specially if they're close to the truth
Sometimes they can hurt you so badly
You get into the gin and vermouth!

This worldwide scourge of obesity
Is as serious as it's ever been
On average about sixty percent of us
Can be considered anything but lean!

It's a scourge that afflicting all mankind
In this world of instant things
Microwave meals at your fingertips
You're eating at the sound of the ding!

So when someone says, “You look flabulous”!
It's a warning your life is in danger
Get on that bike or run a few miles
Take this advice from this flabulous stranger!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Very clever one here!! Love the message, as always. Really like the fourth stanza in particular. Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:08 AM
You are always so kind to me my sweet! Love, Jack xxxx
A   Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Jack... I'm gonna take this run.... I'm not heavy... love your poem.... very different but in a way truthful.... thanks...pd
Ellison Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:35 PM
I'm on a mission! Have lost 18.6 pounds since June 4th. How you ask? LOL Well, I ride my stationary bike for 15 minutes three times a day. Salad once every day and NO SNACKING AFTER 6:00 PM! Thanks for dropping by, my friend! LOve and big hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx
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