Fixation

FIXATION	

There was music    of course
Not the usual sort of girl    at least in my fixated estimation
Jump rope
“Winnie the Pooh”
Teddy bear
These survivors unto high school and through
Rather a “flower child’ she
It wasn’t the way she walked    although?
She had a dancer’s spring in her step
She wore no perfume
Wasn’t the way she dressed    but then I never saw her best
Ah!  but that long brown hair    a strand always in her face
                               (one eye’s worth)
And the way it hid her priceless blush
Yes!    more than anything    the blush!
The question must arise – 
Was she beautiful?
Was she pretty?
Cute?
The eyes
The mouth
The nose
High cheek bones
All must be in fine proportion    and refined    chiseled -
But?     with her     who could tell?
She had a way of inserting herself
                        (thrusting is too course a word)
      of waltzing right in!     of quietly mesmerizing someone
She knew how almost silently bold she was
A ballerina on stage
Every eye on her    and    she knew it!
It was all about her    but I didn’t care
She looked at the floor    yet
                looked through your eyes and into your heart
No demure
No batting of lashes
No swinging of hips
No soft-talk honey
Oh what a small crowded room    with just the two of us
She had that natural mascara
Lips needing no paint
Almost a Middle East complexion
                        (the basket    with snake)
                                   (the oboe)
                                      (sitar)
Teen virtuoso
And I    prisoner of the mind    the enchanted moment
Movement
Music
Fixation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/1/2010 8:29:00 PM
DAVER ~HoW R U !! I Find YOUR pOem Muncho CUTE : ) ~SKAT
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:45:00 PM
So good to know this was "Real!"
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:36:00 PM
wow, you outdid yourself with this one, Daver. Was she a real fixation from your teen years, this one? Sounds like some enchantress and au natural. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:14:00 PM
Very descriptive write about what reads like a beautiful young lady that had you mesmerized...Enjoyed ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Lunester is a sleeping aid that can cause the person to sleep walk, drive while asleep, be asleep but not know they are asleep..It was named for the Luna Moth...Sara
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Date: 7/28/2010 4:14:00 PM
Well you are taking me for a ride today Daver! This is a beauty. Like the way yo0u take us with you. Okay ..I would fall in love with her too with this description! Masterfully done, amigo.
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:52:00 AM
Lovely,Its seems she was a natural sweety,cute,cute poem,I love the way you write and I might be a grown up,but I love 'Winnie the pooh':)loovely!C.C
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:08:00 AM
A very cute and witty poem Daver, really enjoyed your poem.. I love all them lines,, Did not know you had this one in you..Trully enjoyed,..p.d.
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